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for Mikael Pacioli

by minkabi

person hami
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the anon above, it's me! Forgot to put my name.
person mw0627
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I wanted more Jovan =/
person kop
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kabi, i was wondering about your carrier stories... If a carrier kills his abusive husband, what would be his fate? Would they throw him in prison forever or something else? Also, what if a handicapped person turns into a carrier? Are they still expected to breed as the carriers are so valuable? (For example a person with severe autism.)
person Avernion
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like Mike. He is so pure, innocent and headstrong. I hope he gets to be happy.
person Sara
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm relly happy that you're updating this story again, I started reading it quite a while ago after reading your other stories and I enjoyed the initial setup a lot. I think it might be my favorite out of all of your stories so it's great to see that it hasn't been abandoned.
Keep up the great work, your stories are a very good read.
person nivell
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mikael...sometimes you just got to go with the flow and try to make yourself happy. Hope he finds his happiness soon.
person FuneralRoses
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh, Mikael better watch out. The persistent ones have a way causing trouble, not always big trouble but trouble just the same.
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying the story and think profiling a monk turned carrier brilliant! I like Mikael with his educated and straight forward view of things in a place where things are not as they seem and full of duplicity.

Jovan seems alright and hoping he's another gentle soul (like Malcolm)and not some abusive monster.
person mw0627
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jovan is cute, I like him lol. He seems perfect for him, young and curious, but still shy.err
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Kabi you're killing me >.< I feel as though I'm desperately grasping for crumbs for more of your writing I cant tell you how much I enjoy them! Love to read more continue the wonderful work!