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for Mikael Pacioli

by minkabi

person ceedee
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mikael -he's one of the special boys. Looks like he and the others are in for a rougher time- bet they have to be perfect carriers from now on. yech - Love your writing.
person Sweets
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this, please, please, please finish it and the rest. The world building is incredible.
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually read this in one sitting, and found myself utterly absorbed. You have a wonderful writing style, and your characters are believable and intriguing. Wonderful!
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you updated this too. :3
poor boy, so confused D: i just wanna give him a hug >.<
At least he's talking to a man that seems nice.
Gods i hope this has a happy ending D:
person Rene
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter can't wait for the next one
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I dont think Blake's happy...
I wonder if kael will eventually be happy...

I wonder about the other boys in Blake's group..... after all, they're 'high class' ........
are they happy?
person ceedee
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Blake happy- only that he is thwarting his families desire for grandchildren. Don't think his family nor Thad have paid at all. He probably wants his carriers safe and that they don't have forced marriages
person Laiko
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your style is unique. You describe little and your use of codes are distracting, but I'm still able to picture this world in my head. You have some interesting ideas. I like that fact that your character, who is spiritual, questions himself. Does he lie and assimilate or risk all the values that define himself? I like this.
person L.S.
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what this when Blake was forced to marry that guy?? or has that already happened?? Also, love the chapter! thanks for the speedy updates!!
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor mikael, made me sad this chapter somehow T-T
the pity I felt when he tried to accomplish what CEC wanted. He was really afraid it hurt to see him.

I want more Mikael and Ivan -grins- ganbatte ne! You update more lately eh? Why? Not that I am not thankful, just asking -grins-