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for Mikael Pacioli

by minkabi

schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Rowe House...

there's some dark dark mystery behind this place....

UNLEASH THEIR SECRETS!!!! XD
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And sooooooo....

We have a case of 'rebellious carrier' here who won't 'abide by the rules and be a ''normal'' carrier'...
For all such cases, who refuse to submit to their subservient roles, are they all sent to Rowe house?

and according to what the doctor said. This only is such in this part of the world?
It's different "In the East" eh? Is it? I don't know.
The characters protrayed so far has given more of "the West" feel, and middle east for Ghali.

But now... Mikael is being 'rescued' is he?
I wonder if the center will get him. Unless he run's. to the east. India was it? It's a safe place to be for carriers?

Hmmm ah well~ We'll see :D

Till later Kabi

- nekoii
person ceedee
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Talk about an intense change- I'm glad that Mikael is escaping the rehabilitators- too bad Blake had no clue. That Demen was able to rescue him - will he escape his fate will the Father help him or is he too removed from life.'
Wow.
person Avernion
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting more and more heartbreaking. When the Father said "we are all here for you", I though; "But you're not. Mikael is all alone." I really hope he'll have a happy ending.
person Noir Genesis
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lost interest cause it isn't explained what a carrier is and what the difference from normal to carrier is

confused and lost

writing style is excellent though
person MissMiki
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah I miss you Kabi!! :) love the update
person kagecat
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
he makes me so wanna slap him a bit. But i'm just convinced he's been brainwashed :/
person Nivell
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eh? *scratches head* Kabi, did you re-write the last chapter? I could have sworn it ended differently...and Jovan was mentioned in it too. *laughs* It's funny how I remember things about this story! =) I miss it. Hope to see more!
person Nivell
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*added to my original review* Yes, I remember now! Jovan had given him some gifts when they met two times again but Mikael turned them away. Awww, wish you had kept that scene. Any reasons to the changes?
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
top class carriers?
I wonder what makes them top class.... looks?
definately not brains... they dont like carriers to have too much brains do they? che.

soooo.... how do they look like eh?

Anyway, good to hear from you again Kabi :)
I hope you're well, and doing well with what ever you do in life.... yeah...

okay... *silence*

I'll take my leave now.