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for Mikael Pacioli

by minkabi

schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wahw!

Who is this ADMIRAL! one with dark eyes, greying hair, and an inscrutable expression~
mysterious~
and possibly, Mikael's good turn down his path of life?
yes please! the downward spiral this young MAN is going down on is really not good for the metaphorical vision.

there's something about this admiral that's really intriguing, and admirable. he treats the carriers as their own original gender. men. with pride and purpose, a greater purpose than the other normal men.
perhaps then Doctor Demen will change his mind about this coastal region.
IS positive change happening?
yes pelase!

bring it on Kabi, all this is great as it always has been~ :D

- nekoii
person fan
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whenever you update its like christmas.
Eager to know what happens next!
person MissMiki
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
why do you make me hopeful with the appearance of the Admiral?? I mean, even if he is preoccupied with looks, I love that he uses the term "man." Of course I'm all for dispelling gender dichotomies-but term "carrier" and its use is certainly used to mean everything /but/ male. (LOVE your work. i can't tell you enough). God I hope things work out for Mikael and maybe with the Admiral??? dare I hope?? It's a hard thing to do in your universe.
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
argggggg you are torturing me with this short updates and such long intervals. may the muse of writing smack you up side the head and get your creative juices flowing faster. btw I love your stories
person FuneralRoses
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw shit, more trouble for poor Mikael. Then again.... *shrug*
person ceedee
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What kind of hell is Dura Corps? After almost being put into a house where carriers are abused now what? I hope at some point carriers develop legal rights to protect them. Love the story.
person nivell
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh, wonder what type of guy Mikael's going to meet. Unless it's the Rear Admiral.
person nivell
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I hope Mikael meets Jovan still! The thought of Mikael going to Rowe House over simple disciplinary problems makes me sick to my stomach thinking of the rest of the carriers who were sent there and never made it back. It scares me to think that their disciplinarian problems could have been so minor, yet they are sent for...torture. I hate the Rowe House and the sick fucks who regale in the existence of a butcher shop and hope they and it burns to the ground. Can't wait to see what you have coming next.
person kay
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was by chance the first of your universe I read.
Is jovan gonna make an appearance? His and mikaels first conversation was precious, its nice to know a little more about rowe house. Rowe house seems like such a waste for fertal wombs! Instead of dying it'd make more sense if it was like some sort of whore house. Such a mystery!
Please update soon!
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, this is sad. And you changed the whole story >_<, but for good XD. Man, this is just heart breaking, poor thing, Mikael *sniffs*