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for Mikael Pacioli

by minkabi

schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very glad I was wrong about your running out of steam. Yeah, real life does get in the way. Mikael deserves a happy ending, and I hope that's what's coming up.
person J42
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the changes and the update. Thanks for keeping this going. He reminds me of Phideas, with his intelligence.
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I searched for this story last night to reread the last chapters and see if there was anything I missed! VERY cool seeing an update today! At the end of chapter 13, I took a liking to Admiral Holly and hope things look up for Mikael. I think it will be rewarding to read the Admiral's impressions of how truly exceptional Mikael is as a person and not some mindless carrier when they finally meet and talk.

You're one of my AFF favorites Kabi, keep up the great work!
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was very glad to see an update, but disappointed that it's so short. I'm beginning to get the feeling you're running out of steam on this series. Hope not.
person nivell
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updated. Am intrigue about Hylas House now...
person clovermax
schedule May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hylas House- hopefully is better than Rowe House. Mikael is not nearly as strong as he was before he became a carrier. I love your writing but really hope Mikael as a bit better luck with the next evolution of his life. Keep writing please
person withfeeling
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eagerly awaiting the next installment! :D
person :)
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the general. What made you want to rewrite this?
person dhts
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really want to know the reactions of his peers toward mikael. I wonder if things are gonna be better for him. ;n;
Also, id like to know why feining a suicide attempt saved him from the butchers block. Love love love!
person kagecat
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's horrible. So basically, it's:
"If you're not broke, we'll kill you. If you are broke, we'll fix you can call it a day."
Really? WTF.

Poor baby.
That officer though... he has my attention for calling Mikael a man and not a carrier.
I hope he's nice, because I'm sure Mik feels horrible that he has to keep secrets from his Father.