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for Mikael Pacioli

by minkabi

schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow... very intriguing story! Brilliant so far! You have me hooked I dare say :D You writing is nice and you actually care about the plot so... what is there not to like? Waiting for more!
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hy kali! i really love your stories (you create a whole world of your own and i think your ideas and the way you write them down are amazing.). mikael's in particular. it's rare to find a story in this genre that is written by a skilled author.^^ are you going to continue writing? i really hope so. i'm curious what's going to happen next.

jenny

sorry, english is not my native language, so...-__-°
person kagecat
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have... mixed feelings about this. I'm glad he's in a freer place, but I really worry about what expectations he has to meet to stay there.
person kame
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mm. Tasty!
I love your universe. If I could I would pay you to only right short stories (and longer stories too!) About them.
If you ever produce an anthology or a carrier survival guide, id be first in line to buy it!
person tf
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, glad to see Miakel safer and just more of this verse-thanks for the update!
person nivell
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see another update. We get to see Jovan again, yay! Mikael's story is a bit special...he's probably one of the few(?) carriers that have survived that horrible house. Seriously, Dr Demen is kind of a hero. I hope we get to see him again soon.
person MissMiki
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, i can tell a big change is about to occur for him :( poor Mikael.
person nekoii-desu
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*is lazy to log in* Thank god you have the anon review on!

Yay for Mikael~! He's finally gonna get a better life now.... with... Holly? xD Why such a name? xD Sounds so unlike for an officer of sorts. Expected a more masculine name.. but ah well... ^^

- nekoii
person nekoii-desu
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What heaven has Mik landed himself into... Awesome! And INSIDE military base! to think such wonder exists when other CEC's do sooo much.... more. or less. depending how you look at it.

Hope Holly comes into the picture soon. :D

- nekoii
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Now there's Jovan Walder, and Admiral Holly. I wonder about their roles further into Mik's story. It's great to see him being alright again, I just hope they don't have those written exams in this CEC Campus. Hylas is a haven as far as it's going, and without any of those demons from Wiltshire, it would be a perfect example for CEC's everywhere. For now at least.
I hope there are no hidden dark secrets whithin Hylas.

- nekoii