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wow. Things do not look good for Mikael. like at all. damn. o.o

Poor Mikael - why were the authorities so interested in societial readings what is he being set up for or rather whom...

I like this story the best.Please update soon.

I somehow missed all of these new side fics but glad I found them since I thought August might be it! Hope Mikael has an easier time than the others did...

poor mikael, the guy didn't even know what the hell was going on. he's so naieve about it all that's its almost as sad as the other carriers who really knew what was happening to them. he's so (realtively?) sheltered, i'm sure its all just driving him mad. by the way, excellent universe you've created in all of these works of yours. i really felt for the characters on a very human level, it was like reading the diaries of someone from our own history. you really get to know them and in a way their husbands, but as the reader we only really know them as well as the carriers do, it's like i was really living their lives, there were times that i wanted to stop reading because i felt helpless and trapped, it was all so real. kudos to you! keep up the good work (if you're even still writing for this). i for one would love to know how things work out for everyone, i especially took a liking to Havar and Chase, and now Mikael. I loved all the characters, but these three stood out to me, and of course Jesse, can't forget Jesse.

God should help Mikael ! :(

Does the guard interested in him?! Poor Mikael!!! :((

Update soon! ;)

Poor Mikael, that guard was such a douche bag. Hope to see more!!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww too short
can u email me when u update?
make sure to add the link to this lol

stories@brootalz.com

D: more please? ^^

Why are you so AWESOME???? Why???? I just love all of your stories; they are soooooo amazing!!!! You actually make me think about the what ifs of the world! AMAZING!!!