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for Mikael Pacioli

by minkabi

person Meid
schedule September 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Nooo! How could you end it like that >o<

person cheesekun
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Discovered another chapter here after reading on FP! Thanks for sharing this great story! Hope you will one day consider writing more :D
person Kristen
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really miss your stories.
person Ej
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story, but so much is inferred rather than flat out said that I'm pretty sure I'm missing the point. And I didn't understand AT ALL how pretending the commit suicide would save him from getting killed (before midnight), or was he not about to be disembodied? Honestly I'm confused, but the concept behind the story is such a good idea that I don't mind not knowing.
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue writing this. Its good and i want more kabi fics :D
person J42
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Have missed seeing Mikael around - miss his unassuming and bewildered modesty/honesty. Can't get enough of your world really! :-)
person kagecat
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH YAY FOR AN UPDATE. <3 Much loves.
I'm glad there's at least *someone* that's worried for other's well-being. Because no one else seems to give a damn. :/ I give Mikael many hugs.
person nivell
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOh, I'm interested to know more about Jaden's sponsor. And I still want Jovan to be Mik's love interest. Great to see you updating this.=)
person Althydia
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. Mikael is so sweet - I feel sorry for what's happened to him. At least he has some friends, but I'm not sure anyone really understands him and his beliefs at Hylas House or among other carriers.
Hopefully the man who will choose him won't be too horrible and will respect his opinion. Could it be the Admiral or Jovan? At the moment, I get the feeling that Admiral Holly would respect him more (but he also seems much older than him).
Also: I always pictured Mikael as blond. I must have missed something...
person clovermax
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mikael- the question is now are they being set up as the ultimate pawns of a governement that doesnt care.