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for Songs from the DARK Jukebox

by kiix

schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I finally read the original oneshot and boy do I like it!! Back in Black was really good. I'm glad to see this is how Magnus and Neko turn out; they seem 'at ease' with themselves and each other which definitely isn't a given in Neko-laus. I'd really love to see you writing about what happens in between both stories and even after Back in Black... :) Anyways, congratulations on completing NaNoWriMo!!!! And I liked the way you ended both of these stories; open ended with a positive note, allowing our imaginations to roam whichever way we want them to. Mine is going towards the sex side of their relationship... I have a thing for domineering and possessive characters which probably explains why I'm so drawn to yours.
Good luck with everything and I'll keep lurking in wait for your next story!!
person NessaC
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So sorry I've been away for so long!! Life caught up...

FIRE WOMAN: Love it!!! Once again, you've condensed a potential long story, in my opinion. But Kodak moments are good too, and snippets like these are fantastic.

WITH OR WITHOUT YOU: SIDE A: So sorry to hear you lost 5 pages of this! I can only imagine how much more there might have been, but I like this first snippet.
WITH OR WITHOUT YOU: SIDE B: Really enjoyed having Zeph's point of view as well, and the quirky ending of 'who owns who' :)

RUSTED FROM THE RAIN: Fairly different from what I'm used to from you, but different in a good way; although my personal preference is fantasy, not sci-fi.

I'll try to be a better reviewer from now on, uni's started up again, so we'll see...


~Spiritxx
person ri
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Long time not reading ur story and i'm re-amazed by this one. I thought i will wait for Cider, but i think i'll get hooked with this one! Keep up the good job. And as always, congrats for the publication.

Cheers,

Ri
person tdorian
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Kiix and who the hell are you ? LOL Really you surprised me with those first two stories.I can't find your usual dark wicked sense of humour.It's more angsty, more sad...but I LOVE it !!! Aida
person tdorian
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
absolutely, you have to gon with this serie !!! Hum...could you try with a Nine inch nails song ? *wink* I mean, with what you came up with Durna duran I can only dream what Trent Reznor would inspire you ! Aida
person tdorian
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hum...death love.Beautiful idea.AIda
person tdorian
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm gonna dream of Neko and Magnus...that was HOT.And that kiss...Jeeeeeezzz ! Yo totally rock my dear.Aida
person NessaC
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY liked "Back in Black". it's almost like it's a summary of a longer story.. could easily be expanded - take Neko-laus's perspective, trace his journey to the city, his life in the shambles, etc. :)

great work *sends virtual chocolate chip cookies*

~Spiritxx
person NessaC
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I quite like these one-offs :)

Really really like Under the Milky Way :D

~Spiritxx
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this one...it was dark yet sweet...like dark chocolate...hmmm...i love these "songs from the jukebox"!