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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, this was so good! I was at the edge of my seat reading about the drug bust. OMG, I thought for sure Michael was dirty and he was gonna turn on Brian. What a great cop! OMG, what a great writer you are! I felt like I was reading a real detective novel! I thought for sure one of them was gonna bite the big one! Hahaha Great work! Looking forward to the next case!
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah, good plot and the ability to write a smokin hot sex scene... I think I've got a fan-crush on you. ;)
Good choice choosing to shorten things rather than write about unenjoyable sex for the first love scene. Definately looking forward to their next case.
Good choice choosing to shorten things rather than write about unenjoyable sex for the first love scene. Definately looking forward to their next case.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love cop fics.
And I'm really like your characters so far.
Quite looking forward to more.
And I'm really like your characters so far.
Quite looking forward to more.
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start! :D I can't wait to see what the rest of it's like! ^_^ Brian and Michael are both very entertaining, he he :D Please keep up the great work! ^_^
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I hope Michael comes out of this alive! Can't wait to read the next chapter! And boy, Michael is forward, isn't he???????