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OMG, I feel honored! You wrote the sex scene just for moi????? Thank you!!!! XD

I'm really glad you updated this; I was actually thinking about the story the other day, wondering what happened w/it!

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

Thank you for answering my question! This was an interesting chapter; I feel sorry for Vestige, having to follow thru w/the violence, even tho he doesn't feel right doing it. I guess he'd better get used to it, being from a mafia family and all.....but I CAN'T BELIEVE you left the chapter off where you did!!!! Evil, evil, evil! I hope the next chapter continues where you left off......

Thanks for answering my question! I'm curious: I was assuming that they were in Italy b/c of the name Ferrera. Oh, wait, maybe it's in Spain? My bad, Ferrera's a Spanish name, right? Anyway, what's a nice Jewish boy like Scott Levine doing in Spain (or Italy)? Altho, based on your story, Scott is certainly NOT nice! Anyway, great chapter; wonder who slipped the stuff into Pazhur's backpack? The kid in his class? The one he borrowed the math book from? Couldn't have been Scott; he wasn't near his backpack. Intrigue!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Boy, they're BOTH so foward! And I suppose w/Pazhur (I screwed up his spelling again, sorry!) kissing Vestige again after yelling at him; pretty confusing! Their banter is pretty funny and they seem to get along really well. Maybe they'll just wind up being good friends.....Why is Vestige afraid of seeing any jocks? Is he really effeminate? I didn't get the impression he was.

Great chapter. It looks like Pazhar might be able to have his way with both brothers. This could leat to a catfight. Or a threesome. Or both! I love it. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I just started reading this tonight. Great story; very interesting. But what a disappointment for Pazhur (did I spell it right?). He's on a basketball scholarship, but there's no basketball at the college? Makes no sense. I love his interaction w/the brothers; esp. Silvano, or is it Silvanio? Sorry. But boy are they forward! I can't imagine how confident you must be to just blatanly talk about sex and their preferences the first time they meet! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Great start! Waiting for more.

Cool funny new story. Things are definitely wacky at the host family's estate.

Liking it so far. Update soon x

This was both funny and amazing! Great start!