rate_review Reviews

nice so far! maybe some watter play? clean the bunny out? or not... i be wierd :P

I think josh should ride Adrian cock
I think Adrian should being fuck in women clothing
I think Nick should fuck Adrian in a public bathroom or be suck off
Maybe double penetrated by both josh and nick
maybe fucking his bunny ears or rimming it with either nick or josh cock
You should write more about rimming Adrian now that I think about it
I think there should be a chapter where Adrian is just solo.

Wow, this is so hot. Write more! Write more!

oh that was so fuckin hot...
update soon please!!! I would love to see a long, drawn out fuckin threesome!!!!

I enjoyed this story, it's a cool idea and executed nicely, but I do have one piece of constructive criticism, your smut is a little bit unrealistic. You see, gay sex is actually a lot more painful problematic than you describe, especially during a person, or bunnys, first time. One necessary component that was lacked was a large amount of anal lubricant to ease the pain. Bare skin is way too much friction for such a sensitive area and when doing it that way you risk tearing, bleeding, even permanent damage to the receiving partners sphincter. And they would be in mind numbing amounts of pain as well. A lot of very experienced couples would never do it without at least some spit as lubricant, so a beginning couple would need large amounts of some kind of lubricant. Okay, I'm beginning to repeat myself and I don't mean to be trying to tear you down, I really did like that story and the idea behind it. You should definitely keep writing, you're very good at it. :]

That was oddly hot. I have to tell you I laughed when I read the summary and thought I'd get a good chuckle out of the whole thing, but that was.. really good. I'm definitely interested in reading more.

hmm, it was hotter when they were really willing. and i think josh deserves something for treating them like that. if he was somehow turned into a supmissive, then adrian could be his dom for a while, i bet that could be pretty hot too!

*scratches out toys and put just about fucking anything but scat/guro and means anything*

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I have been trying to fucking find this forever; FINALLY! It's still one of my favorite stories in original

.....still it makes me feel dirty but eh I don't give a damn; it's good smut.

Suggestions? hahahhaha food play and collars? Toys? God I'm a pervert....

i rather like this story, it's really hot. but i wonder, perhaps it would be possible to turn josh into a sexfluffy too (perhaps if adrian bit him or something like that)? accidentally or not. that way nick would be the master of 2 toys that would be hot too.

of course it's just an idea it just came up in my head after reading this