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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it when Talon said Ryo wasn't even that good, lol. ^-^
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story <3
I love your sense of humor!
I loled so hard at the dialogue that interrupts their sex scene XDD
I find Ryo to be quite the entertaining character, lol, how will Talon
be able to last the week with him. Please update soon
XxAeriasxX
I love your sense of humor!
I loled so hard at the dialogue that interrupts their sex scene XDD
I find Ryo to be quite the entertaining character, lol, how will Talon
be able to last the week with him. Please update soon
XxAeriasxX
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GOD this is sooooooo HOT!!! I REALLY love this story. I almost want to go back and re-read that sex scene. *drool* I think I almost passed out from overheating lol. Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait to see more from you.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way that Ryo doesn't act entirely human, which is often the fatal error of authors who feature non-human characters. He is shown as being more predatory which translates through the way he treats Talon. I think that last scene was exceptionally well written, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update very soon please!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was hot!!!! I can't wait to see how much hotter it will get!!!!! See you next cahppie!!!!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story.
Is this a repost, from here or somewhere else? Because I could swear I’ve read these first few chapters before…how could someone forget that third one. ;P Hawtness. Not to accuse you of plagiarizing or anything, just curious.
I’m glad to see it is being continued, very creative and original story, not to mention sexy as hell… Ryo is just cool.
Is this a repost, from here or somewhere else? Because I could swear I’ve read these first few chapters before…how could someone forget that third one. ;P Hawtness. Not to accuse you of plagiarizing or anything, just curious.
I’m glad to see it is being continued, very creative and original story, not to mention sexy as hell… Ryo is just cool.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, it has good grammar and punctuation. I appreciate stories that are interesting and well-written. Now I'm interested; keep up the writting.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great funny story. Ryo is quite the unrepentant demon. Talon is such a good host. I laughed when he told Ryo that it was not that good. I look forward to reading more.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho ho ho ho. Sneaky Ryo and poor bewildered Talon. Can’t wait till dinner, bwahahahaha.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find Ryo very amusing ^^
Ch. 2 was very well written, I like how steamy things got. Overall, a very original concept.
I can't wait for chapter 3
Ch. 2 was very well written, I like how steamy things got. Overall, a very original concept.
I can't wait for chapter 3