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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I love how Talon thinks one thing and says something completely opposite. And Ryo's
just too much! XD
This story is hilarious, not to mention hella sexy. That sex scene was a master piece.
Anyways, I wonder how Talon's plans are gonna work out now! Can't wait for more! Keep writing <3
just too much! XD
This story is hilarious, not to mention hella sexy. That sex scene was a master piece.
Anyways, I wonder how Talon's plans are gonna work out now! Can't wait for more! Keep writing <3
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. and the "flashback" on chapter 4 was a stoke of genius. most people would put as a perlude, but because you put a little bit later, but not to late, it seemed interesting.
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update, I'm dying to know what happens nect!
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie!!! The end is the beginning of this whoöe ordeal am I right?? See you next chappie!!!
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, nice chapter!
I see there was a bit of a cliffy at the end
Can't wait to see what happens next!!
LOL at Talon's: 'You like everything and everyone.'
Update real soon!
RedChii
I see there was a bit of a cliffy at the end
Can't wait to see what happens next!!
LOL at Talon's: 'You like everything and everyone.'
Update real soon!
RedChii
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
Update soon please! :)
Update soon please! :)
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah, chapter 3= HOT! I am officially adding this story to my watch list!
Can't wait for chapter 4!
Can't wait for chapter 4!
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I officially love Ryo. I loved how he stopped in the
middle of all the sexiness just to piss off Talon. I laughed
so hard when Talon said it wasn't good. XD
Gimme chapter 4!!! lol ^____^
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you! For choosing to continue this story!
Your writing style is lovely, and your characters simply captivating.
Keep up the great work.
I love the sense of intrigue created by chapter 4, which suggests
a deeper relationship between the two main characters. I can't wait for
more :)
Update soon please!
Your writing style is lovely, and your characters simply captivating.
Keep up the great work.
I love the sense of intrigue created by chapter 4, which suggests
a deeper relationship between the two main characters. I can't wait for
more :)
Update soon please!
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg omg! Teh hotness! This story made my day! You must must MUST continue!
P.S. Talon is yummy! Ryo is yummier! I love it!
P.S. Talon is yummy! Ryo is yummier! I love it!