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for Entanglement

by sorrowfall

schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet, Ruka being so upset and over protective sinc he made Suke bleed. But, as Suke said, he's used to being hurt! But it was sweet that Ruka took care of him. Hopefully, Suke will be fine for the concert! Otherwise, he'll just have to stand! hahaha
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They finally did it! Oh, Suke will be fine; Ruka will put some ointment or cream on him and he'll be as good as new! (Or so I'm told). Hopefully Suke won't regret it in the A.M.!
person smint45
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so HOT!!! And well HOT!!!! Ad of cause HOT!!!!! I want more give me more!!! Who will be the top??? Probably Ruka the way Suke behaves!!!! I can't wait I really hope you post soon!!!!! See you!!!
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh, I can't believe you left it like that!! Seriously tho, good updates! I'm glad Suke and Reiko were safe and also Akiro, from Ruka's street (or drag?) racing! So, are the cops gonna come back? Will Jiro be ok? Why did they take Jiro? Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
person kylee123
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Entanglement. The story is very well written. The last bathroom scene with Ruka and Daisuke was very hot.I am eager to read the next chapter. Thanks for the great story.
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God that was so funny in the restaurant! Akira is so cute; he's so innocent. And yeah, Reiko is pretty smart for a 16 yr. old. Great story w/intrigue, mystery (who's setting Jiro up and why?), humor and of course smut! Cant' wait to find out what happens in the uncle's office!
person smint45
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw I absoloutly love this story!!!!! I love it that all agree with Sukes and Ruka relationship!!!! I also think Ruka is good for him!!! He learns to let go!!!! With his job where he alway needs to stay in control it is important that he has at home somebody to take over the control, thats his natural compensation!!!! And it his necessary for him to survive and to stay sane!!!! So Ruka is the best that could happen to him!!!!!! I can't wait for the next installment!!!!!
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's good that Suke is trusting Ruka more and knowing that Ruka won't hurt him. Good chapter!
person smint45
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!!!! The smutt was so hot!!!!! I want more!!!! I'm so happy that Suke likes it and that they finaly got to that point!!!! I really can't wait to see how it will continue!!!!! See you next chappie!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They're so sweet together! Ruka is so nice to want to take care of Suke and protect him. But he knows that Suke could probably kick his ass! Great chapter, looking foward to the next one!