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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is the best chapter yet! It's nice that Myrtle is getting better. And poor Ben really needs the break. He has been working so hard just for them to survive. What is he going to do when Jack isn't there everyday? He has to go back to work sometime right? You do such a good job with all of your characters that I forget that I'm reading. Can't wait for the next update.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the dynamics of this story, thank you for the update
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is surprising dark/dreary? I can't find the word for it at the moment, but nonetheless, this is amazing characterization. You're an amazing author. Thank you for writing and sharing. I hope that you continue to create works such as this and the many others that you have already finished and have started.
-kaze
-kaze
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. I'm so hooked!
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another beautiful story, I realy do like the idea a lot.
And those three months to 18 put at ease my hate for minor-adult pairings,
or big age differences in fiction and real life.
So I really enjoyed reading this.
Ben is a really interesting character.
God for a second I thought look a vampire-were story; someone bein g tortured, like Ben's evil brother...
Hahahahaha
Thank God it isn't so.
I leave this review with a mental picture of Ben's creepy house.
I can't wait for handyman to fix it up;;)))
And those three months to 18 put at ease my hate for minor-adult pairings,
or big age differences in fiction and real life.
So I really enjoyed reading this.
Ben is a really interesting character.
God for a second I thought look a vampire-were story; someone bein g tortured, like Ben's evil brother...
Hahahahaha
Thank God it isn't so.
I leave this review with a mental picture of Ben's creepy house.
I can't wait for handyman to fix it up;;)))
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see an update to Lost and Found. This is an awesome story. Jack and Ben obviously have a long way to go. Obviously Ben is in need of help. The pressure of taking care of his grandmother for two years and hiding it from the government is too much. I understand his anger and his insulted pride. I just hope Jack will be able to persuade Ben to accept a little help. The story is going great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow ythats weird.... odd and strange... spooky and I want more!
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
o man this is weird. im dying to know what is going on; you have an awesome style. :O
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT THERE!!! I wants moar! Puh-leeeeeassssse!!!! *puppy dog eyes* Awesome story, got me hooked from the start. As always, engaging and just deliciously hot. :D