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argh... what did it have to stop?!
That scene was hott... I'll definitely have to go read your other stories now!

I'm so happy for an update! This is such a fantastic story and soo it will be a sexy one too!

I just can't get enough of your writing. You bring a real depth to you characters that keeps bringing me back for more. I look forward to the conclusion of this story.

I loved this story. I am so glad you are going to continue with it.

I am SO, SO, SO glad you updated this!!! I really did think you weren't gonna continue with it! I love that fact that Ben seems so bipolar! One minute he's yelling and screaming, and the next, he's a pile of jelly! It's so cute the way he's warming up to Jack. And Jack, OMG, figured out (ok, with the help of webmd.com or something), what was wrong w/Myrtle! Amazing! And the pills work that quickly! Lucky for Jack, or else he'd be out on his butt!

Now hopefully Ben can be a teenager again! Altho, doesn't the bills still have to be paid? Maybe Jack can move in and maybe get a job transfer? Just a thought....

Lol, damn you, now you have me commenting on y!gallery I feel obliged to review here too ;)

Great chapter :) I adored the scene where Ben discovered his grandma was better, it was just so dramatic and emotional, very heartfelt! It was so vivid it was almost like watching it play out on a screen, it was easy to forget it was just a story, lol. I love how much depth you've put into the characters too, it was great to see Ben evolve and go back to being a kid again, it just added a weight of realism knowing his personality before was from the stress. Just curious though, not sure how the American healthcare works, but would Jack have been allowed to use his healthcare on Mrytle without questions? Also is the disease mentioned a real one, it was fascinating to read but I was wondering if it was real or fictional. Ah, sorry for random questions, I shouldn't be bugging the author!

Love your work, and as always look forward to more :)

This was an aawesome chapter. I cried when Ben started crying when Myrtle was cured. I understood exactly how he felt after working so hard for so long to take care of her. Sometimes you can't acknowledge how impossible your life is until there is hope for a better future. So I loved it. I am glad that Jack is taking it slow. I wanted the sex but in this situation, taking it slow was the right thing to do. This way Ben will be absolutely sure of his feelings. I wanted to beg and plead for you to keep posting your stories here at AFF. I visit y-gallery sometimes and I like it. I think that AFF is good for attracting new readers even if they don't always review. After all, I would not have found your wonderful stories if you did not post them here. BTW I have been using y-gallery with IE and it is slow. I will start using Mozilla Firefox. Thanks for the tip. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

I was really happy about Myrtle's recovery and the timing it happened. I hope ya will update soon can't wait! <3

This... this is, to put it simply, the most delicious mix of spicy and sweet that I've had the opportunity of devouring in quite some time. Your writing style is simply superb, and I'm glad I found this story on here. I wait with bated breath for the final chapter. =)

Darn you!! Why so evil XD

Aww Im really glad that Myrtle is back to normal now though! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I read the first chapter when you first posted it, and I can't remember if I left a review or not. So, here I am. :]

I'd leave a more in-depth review, but a simple "I love it" should suffice, as I know all authors like words in general, especially positive ones. No matter how short or small :]

Can't wait for the last chapter.

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