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Aww that was a sweet story. Very nice. Xoxo Robin

The beginning was pretty creepy. I was thinking exactly what Jack was thinking with the whole locked door, werewolf/vampire thing. And what's worst is I'm reading this dead at night so i was really scared but god knows what made me continue to read. I'm glad the story ended happily and... normally I guess. Kinda didn't expect it but at the same time was relieved that it didn't get creepier. Good story.

x3 Amazing~ I'm so happy everything worked out and they'll all be living together in Jack's place! It was a perfect ending, but I certainly won't complain about the epilogue! In fact, I can't wait to read it now~

I loved the ending. I felt sorry for Ben and how scared he was of being abandoned again. I am also glad that Myrtle approved of the relationship. This way Ben will not have to feel torn between his Grandma and Jack. Great writing in this story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

So sweet. I loved this!

What a great, great story! I cried so much during the last chapter! I'm so glad Ben and Jack found each other (and Myrtle too! What a great lady! So perceptive!)

I'm sorry to see this story end; I loved all the characters; especially Ben. I felt so sorry for him, with his home life and having to be a grown up and take care of his grandmother when she was sick. What a great kid.

Anyway, great story! Great job! I'm looking forward to your other story updates!

Wonderful! Absolutely beautiful!! So glad that you finally updated : ) Hope the epilogue is up soon. Can't wait for more!!!

i like this. update soon.

oh yeah! I love this story!!! I'm so glad that Ben is finally being nice to Jack, and welcoming his help. And it's great seeing Myrtle back to being somewhat normal. It's sad when a loved one becomes to sick like that...
Man, I just cannot wait for the next chapter!! I really hope this isn't just the end. I would like to know what happens to Jack after all of this. Does he stay with them? What about his job??
Most of all, I anticipate the sex scene that is bound to happen in the next chapter : ) It better be happenin LOL
Looking forward to it! Hope you update soon!!!!

This is a really hot and touching story! The sick grandmother and the whole situation adding a reality to the budding romance. Which makes the hotness even hotter.
I wonder how grammy will react if she finds out her grandson is gay. I hope she's as awesome as she seems...
Please update soon, if ever there were two boys deserving of some goodness with each other, Jack and Ben are it!