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Arna, huh? An awkward freckle-counter. Like me. I'm thinking that he has a passionate side. Innocent love, maybe? Arna seems to be a pretty practical guy. I can't seem to decide between where you two are heading with Arna. Whether Arna the one who will be with Reyven, whether Arna will take second place to Lesara -who I personally like a great deal with his quirks and general naga-ness-, or something else entirely out there in left field like Arna's blank slate innocence being affected by the pain and stuff Reyven absorbs and becoming like the other sadists of the story. Needless to say, I don't have much of a direction with this, but you asked for reviews so here you go. You're welcome ^.^

I've been reading for a while now and I've decided I really, really, like the smoothness of the roleplaying. It does read like a story and you two have created a certain 'click'ness that makes the story interesting and easy to follow.

Yes I love a little abuse in my wheaties, please xD

Hmm, very good story and like the quick updates! I'm kinda dreading the abuse that Rendell will submit poor Revyn to (gathered from your summary). I can only hope that Revyn will endure and things will have a happy ending. Please continue!!

a very good start and I am really looking forward for more!!

I was very interested in this story and once I read the chapter I enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading more. However in the summary it said it was COMPLETE so it was slightly disappointing when it wasn't continued. I don't know whether you plan on continuing it, in which case you might want to change the summary, or if it is done. However if that is all there is to it I would hope you would consider to continue it because it is definitely promising so far and I hope to read more at some point.