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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As usual your writing goes above and beyond anything I could ever imagine. This story is heartbreaking enough when the abuse was being done by nameless strangers but to imagine that Kiyoshi was being whored out and tortured by his own father and brother for six years. They truly have no souls, I am hooked. I can't wait to read more.
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really intense!! I kind of like Ryo although he is so cruel!!! And the boy beeing Akitos brother that was totaly unsuspected!!! I really want to see what will happen next!!! See you next chappie!!!
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was really intense! please keep writing! loving it a lot! And how cruel could that old man get?!
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent beginning. All your stories are great. I hope Akhito will be able to keep Kiyoshi. I can't wait to read more.
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love this story! please keep writing! this is ver interesting and i really want to read more! please please please! thanks!
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kiyoshi... Is he going to be send back to the brothel ?
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Other than me having problems with remebering the jap-names,it seems very interesting. But I will learn =^-^= Nice work
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love what I've seen so far. I can't wait to see how your new world unfolds.
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again thanks!! This time or the interessting new story fom the black heaven universe!!!! I really like all you storys revolving around the escort!!!!! And this one really starts interesting!!! We finally get to know more about Akito ho always a mystery in the escort!!! I really love this story already!! I hope you keep going with it!!!! See you hopfully soon!!!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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I really liked your story, as well as your style of writing.
The storyline is very original and I hope that you will update soon.
keep up the good work!
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I really liked your story, as well as your style of writing.
The storyline is very original and I hope that you will update soon.
keep up the good work!
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