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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I so wish you'd write more of this sttory.
I know it's not perfect but I'd like to see how it ends.
I know it's not perfect but I'd like to see how it ends.
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ssssimply beautiful.
I want to see more of thiss sstory.
Olease mupdate ssson.
I want to see more of thiss sstory.
Olease mupdate ssson.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing work!
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I really want Akito and Kyoshi to get together especially after Akito demonstrated his superb sexing skills to Jehan. I can see why Akito is feeling guilt about everything. It seems that Kyoshi is kind of cut from the same cloth as Akito any way. He is practically begging for his love. I love how the story is going and I can't wait to read more.
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story, well written. Just one thing that really bothers me, though I guess it's just personal taste...do you have to keep comparing Kyoshi to a kitten?? It's just such a cliché, the poor cute lost pitiful abused little boy whose now taken care of by a generous saviour... okay, but is it really necessary to give such a broad hint by calling him a kitten?
Anyway, I'll continue reading^^
Anyway, I'll continue reading^^
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this chappie was absoloutly fantastic!!!! I can't wait to see what Akitos brother really knows!!!! See you next chappie!!!!
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is amazing. The story is so intense. I can see that Kiyoshi is going to need so much help from Akito to recover. It is hard to imagine that a family could be so cruel to one of its own. The story is fabulous. I cant wait to read more.
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! It's amazing that family can do that to family. So sad. I hope Kyoshi(did I spell that right?) will get past the withdrawal. Luckily he'll have Jehan to help him. And I guess Akito, altho I know Akito doesn't want to go there again. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was intense! i just can't imagine how hard it is for Akito. and what will happen if the drug wears off and kyoshi remembers everything? will he still love his brother? oh i'm so thrilled to know what's gonna happen next!
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is such a dark story! What a curious state the world has come to in this story of yours and I'm anxious to read more :)