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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes I found this story again!
You updated which I am happy about but god I am behind; hope you didn't ditch this story due to lack of interest -.-;
You updated which I am happy about but god I am behind; hope you didn't ditch this story due to lack of interest -.-;
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
alright I'm catching up to this story! I really like how the cop and the boy is interacting already.
......recaptcha the hell man? knoblech process? That makes no sense at all.....
......recaptcha the hell man? knoblech process? That makes no sense at all.....
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
as long as you don't leave this story in the lurch I'm good; going to f5 all the fics that I'm reading x.x
Oh yeah besides grammar tis cool; you can use spell check or w/e and it should be ok.
Oh yeah besides grammar tis cool; you can use spell check or w/e and it should be ok.
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He he he, Travis keeps reacting to Darius! XD How wonderful... And aww, Travis's mum through his toy out :( But, then again, with Darius there, he probably wouldn't need it :P
Your spelling seems fine :) Grammar's a little off in places, but it's nothing serious or anything ^_^ Everything's still completely understandable :)
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D Please keep up the great work! ^_^
Your spelling seems fine :) Grammar's a little off in places, but it's nothing serious or anything ^_^ Everything's still completely understandable :)
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D Please keep up the great work! ^_^
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work!!!
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Aurora seems cute ^_^ Poor Travis though, getting shot! >.< Ouch... And I don't like his mum :( But it seems like things are gonna get pretty interesting soon! ^_^ Please keep up the good work :)
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
anonomys -> anonymous
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no! :( Travis is in the hospital!? :( That's not good... Go, Darius, hurry and protect him! ^_^ This is definitely looking to be a great story! :D Please keep up the good work ^_^
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE dammit
I mean please make more...interesting idea....and good so far
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great work!!! I can't wait for more!