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for Star Bright

by shadowrunner54

person Nuki
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I can say is... Wow.
I find no words to express how great this story is...

Sincerely, Your (speechless) Nuki
person Sonyasha
schedule July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is really interesting. i cant wait to read the next chapter. so please update soon. Ja-Ne =^_^=
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise, I can't wait to see what happens next. I have one problem though, you don't break up the paragraphs enough, it gets kinda annoying so if you could look at that. Can't wait for the next chappy.
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the beginning of this story. I'm totally intrigued now and can't wait to see how Cathleen and Davis develop their relationship and what "other worldly" things are going on with the two of them. I hope you continue with this story and I get to read more......soon:)
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
liking so far!
its very mysterious and I cant wait to find out more of her story!
post soon :)

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