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for Star Bright

by shadowrunner54

schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG... so I am about pissed at cathleen for being such a pansy whiny baby, but you kind of relieved my anger when she finally transformed. Seriously, I was about to be like.. Maude would be a better princess. Cathleen was just a whiny annoying baby, but Maude was all like... I will protect Lance. grrrrr. first time I've reviewed, but then, that's the first time I wanted to grab one of your characters and throttle them. I'm glad she finally came to her senses though.. can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok so this is one of the best stories I've ever read. I've been reading stories on fanfiction.net for nine years and adultfanfiction.net for seven daily, it's my hobby. I only JUST now made an account just so I could tell you how much I think of your story. I love the characters (Go Lance!! I claim to be his first fangirl, lol.) the story is so different from anything I've ever read, I mean I REALLY thought they were vampires... but this is so much better! I really hope you don't decide to drop this story, in fact I think you should turn it into a book, I would even fund it. Sorry if I come off as a crazy fan girl, it's just so rare to find a story THIS good. Anyways keep it up and for all that is holy in our world, PLEASE don't let Lance die.... *Begs*
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD.
In one word?
That chapter was... AWESOME.
UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdatePleeeeeeeeease?
.. Pretty please?
I'll be your best friend!
Okay, well maybe not.
But I'll be one of your favourite readers :D
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's very interesting, I wonder what will happen :P
will you continue it? pretty please?
person Onihime1
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
.. Oh my goodness! This is wonderful! I don't want to wait for the next chapter, but I know that sometimes it can take forever for inspiration to strike and so I'll try my best to be patient.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, you got me all excited, thinking the mystery was about to be uncovered. This is such a good story, please don't leave us hanging for two long! I really want to find out what's going on!
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO! Im so glad you updated! Cant wait to see what Cat really is!
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah! This story is awesome! I didnt think there would be any fantasy/supernatural aspect since its under the romance section but i absolutely love it! Please update soon.
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have to say that I really love this story, along with all the other ones you've written, I really hope we can see some updates to them soon, I'm dying to know whats going on!!!
person Zuka
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it ^^ really mysterious, i'm very impressed, and intrigued, please update as soon as you are able to! i'd love to read more. I also want to say that i like that you're chapters are quite long, more enjoyable to read that way! I really want some answers from Davis now! poor Cathleen lol