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I like how you show that submission is not only about sex, but a state of mind and that it touche every aspect of a sub's life

Oh, he was so nervous! That's so cute!

I don't know if I feel bad for him or for her. It must be hard for her to accept his love but it was kind of mean to try to give him back to his ex Mistress. Anyways, at least he refused to go with her...

Wow! First I was a little taken back by his dominant attitude and specially because Lucinda seemed to let him call the shots. But when he got the bedroom and he explained what he meant by she belonging to him it made more sense and it was kinda cute! I liked it.

Okay, it's completely mean and uncalled for for her to accept to share him. I really see it as betrayal of his trust and love and right now I'm SO mad at her. I feel so bad for Adam. Poor him! Anyways, I'm begging you here! Please, please, please!!! I NEED you to update! I have to know what is going to happen next! Please. If you know what is going to happen but don't have the time to actually write a chap just send me an e-mail saying it, like "okay, at the last minute she doesn't lend him" or whatever. I just really need to know what is going to happen next. Please!!!

awesome story! ^^
hope you update soon, pretty please? :D

Your chapter 5 is the same as your chapter 4 by the way. I must admit that I'm a little surprised by where you've taken this. I'm waiting with a raised brow.

Truly, I expected this to be an atrocity to female dominance and BDSM in general; as is the mode of so many BDSM stories here. Delightfully, I was absolutely estatic at the brilliance of your interpretation. Truly I'm deeply pleased and wonderfully enraptured with your story. I hope you continue to update.

The slave asking for a date. So cute. Please very because you post the same chapter two times

I'm very much enjoying this approach to the Mistress and submissive setup. Lovely setting up of the story, looking forward to more.