AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Never Let Me Go

by carinapir

schedule April 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Wow... I absolutely loved everything about this! I really didn't intend to read it all in one sitting but-- I wish more stories were written like this. You have a way with words, and it was really nice to be able to get into the heads of both Adam and Lucinda. Great work!

person Me
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I know I want them to get together for real in the end, but of course how you get to that happy ending is up to you a quick run through the gloomy Angst fields or a winding trek through the mountains of sorrow?
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHH SO CUTE DON"T STOP 8D

<3

I didn't want this party to be such a power struggle, though :(
person Abril
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic is very good. Different from other fics I read...in this one is the struggle of love that has me enthralled..because you hardly see the love battle...between a relationship like like...I love this fic..come back and update...
person E
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hope you may able to finish this. It is very interesting esp now that they have conflicts.
person reihamoonchild
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story ^^!! I have been waiting for it to update for months, and I was not disappointed. I love the bondage aspect and it really shows what many relationships in the BDSM world are, instead of merely sex games. I would like to see a little more play with the leather instruments (but that's just my personal preference). I can't wait for the next chapter! Well done!
person P
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well Ok u will beg... lurkers like me often need to be proded to comment... i really love your story...¬¬ dhorth chappie by the way i think she must recognize that her toys has limits. and I want to see the next chappie soon!! pretty please?
person LakaraValentine
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure if it's what adam would do, but when my master is displeased with me or testing my love for him i usually kneel at his feet and cry and apologize until he forgives me or tells me that he loves me.
person lilca124
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It sounds interesting. Very good show of his obedience!
person lilca124
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well written and very good characterization. I really like it!