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OMG....my comment just got deleted...njaww T_____T
Anyways as I was saying *sigh* this is a totally different creation from you...I mean this one has a light mood in it...I like it :3
Happy stories are written good with your hands too (not that I expected otherwise)
You should write more like this one....but NEVER stop the drama *laugh* god I love the drama... but if you write a drama-fic and afterwards a happy-fic then it will be kinda....equal you know? then it is like....after almost crying your heart outXD you can chill out and read something with funnynss in itXD

Anywayssss loved it - thank you so much and hope you will....erm nvm...XD

Hello! Young Sage here, the other writer that made a oneshot of Kuromei's characters. Go see "'Break' and 'Keep me not in suspense'" in my profile page for that. Kuromei IS a good writer, and deserves mucho mas love than she's currently getting, even though she literally updates once in a blue moon. Okay, not literally, but still. As for this story, I liked it. The characters seemed, for the most part, true to the actual characters. You incorporated Kuromei's need to name everybody by their hair color rather well. The sex was erotic and not mechanical or tepid at best, which I seem to be running into a lot lately. Spelling and grammar were good to go (always a plus in my book). Perhaps we should start some form of fanclub for her? Then she'd update faster! Or, she'd buckle under the immense pressure and wind up in the looney bin. I'd go for either. Anyways, great job! ~Young Sage

I really have no idea who these guys are but after reading this I think I'll have to go and check out this story you mention to find out. I can't help but hope to see more stories like this from you, it was just so very hot and steamy and I absolutely loved it :)