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for Darkness Becomes Her

by Spleef

person Ingrid
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a story that I always wanted to read and enjoy. I love Greek Mythology and this was one of the stories that always caught my attention. I cannot wait to see what you do next. You follow the myths in such a way that makes me love this story more and more. I really truly am happy that I can read this. Persephone and Hades story always had such a potential to be a great story and I thank you for being able to bring that to life. Keep doing what you are doing!

I cannot wait to read more!!
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All hail chapter 41! Who else was worried that the last chapter was the end? I was......p.s. hades is a cutie ;). Good job cultofstrawberry <3
person circe266
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a pleasure to see that this story hasn't been abandoned. This chapter is rich in interesting characters, and I enjoyed the exploration of the characters' emotions and motivations.

Zeus and Hades certainly are very hardheaded! How much will they have to lose in order to reach their egos' breaking point? It seems that they are in danger of losing what is most dear to them (Zeus: his conquests; Hades: the love of his life). I hope that the next chapter will bring some much-needed realizations.

I look forward to your next update.
person marcy g
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that you focus on Hades' lust more than his obsessive love and care for Persephone, which is kinda a bummer. Sometimes its good to have something cute and simple rather than a racy sex scene. I love your story however. I am simply dying for change.41 ! Please update soon. <3
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! you depict this the best ever! i read 1-40 in two days, i simply loved loved loved it. I didn't understand the last chapter though. it ended so suddenly, at a climax. does this story continue lese where? or does she erase her memory at the river place? help, i need to know! <3 <3 this is the best Hades and Persephone story ever
person lily
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just found ur story by random searching of something good to read- and da-dah.. found ur story. personally i love greek mythology myself..and so this was the cherry on the top for me.. plus smut- whats not to love?? haha.. im nearly halfway through.. but given time. i should prob be finished by tomoro! :P just wanted to say- love your story so far and cant wait to see whats in store for this beloved couple.. and yes.. love the twist you did with the lovers thing (who cares about the "true mythology"- loved that you changed it!)- prefer Hades to be a commited one man guy!! :P

okay off to read! hope you continue with this story... as im running out of chapters to read!! ^_*
person Jacqueline Benita Paul
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I truly adore the whole boldness of the story and the life the characters take on their own just by words is astounding. However as many may have already informed you that the ending is just not as expected. And i sincerely hope you will e-mail me as soon as the last chapter is published and i am curious on how long can Persephone keep up with her grudge? i hope not forever though... but thank you for publishing such an amazing piece of work :)
person Dejsha (Ariana)
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please update soon:) I can't wait to see what Seph does next.
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hades definitely made a mistake in slipping Persephone the pomegranate seeds. On the bright side, make-up sex will be amazing for the both of them. I hope Demeter's anger will soon be eased. I feel bad for all the victims.
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
UGH. I hate Hades. He deserves some serious pain. I hope Seph gets away from him and he has to go through hell to get her back. She's made it too easy for him.