rate_review Reviews

What a phenomenal story! You are a talented writer - please never stop writing :)

What a treat to read a new chapter! Thank you for updating quickly.

As I may have commented before, I like how you write the various gods' and goddesses' perspectives, and how 'in-character' yet contemporary they seem to be, based on my memories of Greek mythology. My particular favorite: Athene's wonderfully astute and cutting comments to Zeus. Also, it is amusing how Zeus seems to have *finally* been dragged (metaphorically kicking and screaming) into a slight bit of self-reflection and remorse. Somehow I doubt it will last . . .

oh this chapter's tone was absolutely perfect! :D

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! THANK YOU!

Waiting felt like forever.

Keep up with the great work!

Also, Hades is so adorable. xD

I can't wait for the next update!

I'm so happy you are continuing your story!

I like that the chapter was focused exclusively on Persephone and Hades this time around. Lethe as the embodiment of the seductive lure of forgetfulness to one who is heartbroken was quite nicely done. And what a relief that Hades finally realized the error of his action and was able to humble himself to ask for Persephone's forgiveness.

You've left us with quite a cliffhanger. (Yes, we know how the myth turns out, but not exactly how you are going to get us there!) I hope that you are able to update soon. It is such a pleasure when I see that you have posted a new chapter.

oooh wow!! i love this story!! I've waited soo long for this chapter and it was worth the wait! thanks for writing such an amazing Seph&Hades story!! i love how Hades can accept that he has done something wrong and apologise to Seph!

This story is so addictively fantastic it's painful- I've been reading non-stop for hours. You have an incredibly talent for storytelling and I am glad you choose to wield it with such force.

But that is a seriously soul-wrenching cliffhanger. Cannot wait to see what Hades does, poor fellow.

Keep up the incredible job!

Deucce

WOW... I just found this fic, and I can only say: wow...
You do a tremendous work, and I LOVE your Hades & Persephone. Please please please come back soon with more, ok?

Hello, I found your story on FF.net but i enjoy reading the whole thing so I came to this site. I have to say i love your story and all the detail you put into it! Its by far one of the best Hades Persephone stories i have read and i hope you keep up the wonderful work! I know your always looking for input and such and just wanted to point out to you that in this chapter when the gods are talking with each other at one point you say Persephone instead of Kora. I'd get very much mixed up myself if i Had to remember when to use one name and not the other. Anyway its no big deal I just thought you might want to know the sentence its in is this “Hades has made it clear that he will not give up Persephone. Hermes will have no more effect on him than a decree from me would.” I hope you keep up the amazing work I look foreword to the rest of this story!

This is really really good. :) I reviewed this on FP, but this version is so much better.