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for Darkness Becomes Her

by Spleef

person circe266
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why am I not surprised that the reunion between Demeter and Persephone went the way that it did? Of course they slipped back into their patterns of overbearing mother and dutiful daughter. Yet I have a feeling that Demeter is going to find out very quickly that Persephone is through being bullied and babied . . .
person Sappyasian
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. The whole story is amazing. :) can't wait for hades to come. True love is just too cute.
person Seshtah
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always. If/when you get this published, I'll definitely track down a copy lol. It will be interesting to see how Hermes presents his message, and to see Demeter and Persephone's reunion. Looking forward to it, but definitely take care of life first /nod

As for other myths to write about, I'd be really interested to see your take on the Egyptian myth of Anubis's birth. I was never able to find a version of the myth that details anything other the basic story where Nephthys tricks Osiris into believing she is Isis and sleeps with her; which creates Anubis. His entire childhood is skipped and anything else with Anubis in the myth is with him acting as the guardian of the dead. It'd be really cool to read your version, especially if you show parts of his childhood and how he became guardian of the dead and such... Up to you obviously lol
person circe266
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love love love the way that you are developing the characters of Persephone and Hades, as shown in their thoughts and in their dialogue. Keep up the great work!
person ZarosKnight
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, the plot thickens!

You said that we should not, but.... AHH, please, for the love of all that's holy, update! I'm going nuts over here!

~ZarosKnight
person mamat
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter!!!!! nice to see seph meeting her grandmother! :D
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Er, any success in publishing the book?
person Seshtah
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting as always <3 I can't wait to see Demeter and Persephone's reunion. It'll be...interesting to say the least lol.
person Jacqueline Benita Paul
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its beautiful on how u write the intimate details of the almost intercourse and of course the wild intercourse of hades and persephone. and i wonder if kora will ever forgive hades though... and will there be acceptance from demeter?
person Daphne
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow you are churning these out!! Amazing, i love how you talked about Minthe, and explained that Hades didn't cheat on his lovely wife (as if who would?) Also I love how the story is going!! Please write more!!