rate_review Reviews

What a beautiful reunion!
I'll bet, though, that this is the calm before the storm?
Demeter is probably fuming by now.

What a lovely reunion -- so tender and sexy. I love the way that you made the decision for her to split her time in the Underworld and above come about as a natural compromise between two people who love each other.

i love this story. i am glad it wasnt a rape fic. please keep updating!! good mythological references. though i think that demeter is a bit too controlling, i am glad the seph is growing balls. eager to know what hades will do next now that he has seph back ..

As much as I am glad that Hades' and Persephone's reunion is imminent, it is a bummer that she has to leave just as she and her mother have connected again, and Demeter has come to accept the adult goddess that she has become. Nicely done.

Aw, that's the most aggravating cliffhanger ever! XP Nicely done. I've continued to follow the adventures of lovely Persephone, and been enjoying every minute. The encounter with Zeus was very well done, especially ending it with the attack on his rose garden. Now, I can't -wait- to see how these two are going to but heads. Add in Demeter to the mix? Huh boy, we've got a rumble going on in here! ^^

I have read all of your Zutara and thought I'd try your originals. Especially when I saw that your main theme was mythology. This happens to be a passion of mine as well. I think I caught most of your adaptions and I happy to tell you that I believe you stayed true to the myths while making them your own. I especially like the "pit" version of the Kronos myth.

As a teacher I was unable to read your story without noticing a few errors that your betas missed. Before I edited your work I wanted to make sure that you were okay with a non-beta catching the mistakes. Most of them are simple word changes.

I was going to tell you about the other book but I saw in your author's note that you already knew about it.

I also thought I would recommend a new book series to you, that is if you haven't already read it :) Sherrilyn Kenyon writes a series called Dark Hunters. She created an entire Pantheon for the Atlantian race and pulls from many mythological figures. Your writing style reminds me a lot of hers. Check her out if you haven't already. I ready Ascheron first and then read started at the beginning with Night Pleasures. Asheron is the one that goes into the most detail about the various gods and goddesses of Greece and Atlantis.

Will be glad for her to go back to Hades

oh no. I hope she won't resist!! She should definitely go willingly. She's in love with Hades! Right?

Oh Zeus, when will you learn? He just doesn't get that his daughter is as worthy of respect and consideration as his sons are.

I love that Persephone can hold her own against his thunderbolts!

This is a really excellent story, overall, but at times can become a bit boring, as it is quite slow going. The writer also needs to check their spelling more often, as I have noticed quite a few typos.