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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh, yeah, I forgot to mention!!
I love what you did with demeter and her human lover!! Please let them be reunited!!! ^^ It would be so sweet! (and maybe seph's wish to zeus to make him immortal? )
anyway go on!!
I love what you did with demeter and her human lover!! Please let them be reunited!!! ^^ It would be so sweet! (and maybe seph's wish to zeus to make him immortal? )
anyway go on!!
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Any Hades and PErsephone action is welcome. I just hope for a long scene:)
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!!! How bout a little this and that with some kink to it?
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Persephone has really come into herself in this chapter, and I like the way you depicted this, and the reactions of Zeus and the other gods.
My humble suggestion for the final lemon: in keeping with the theme of Persephone's character development from a child to a strong, confident, powerful goddess, I think it would be great if the scene started with her turning the tables on Hades, using her powers to 'pursue' and 'capture' him, preferably restraining him in some manner, before satisfying their mutual needs. I also love the shadow tentacle action, so it would be great if you could include that too.
My humble suggestion for the final lemon: in keeping with the theme of Persephone's character development from a child to a strong, confident, powerful goddess, I think it would be great if the scene started with her turning the tables on Hades, using her powers to 'pursue' and 'capture' him, preferably restraining him in some manner, before satisfying their mutual needs. I also love the shadow tentacle action, so it would be great if you could include that too.
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Go Persephone! You tell Zeus exactly how it is! :D That was a well-done and well-paced scene. It's always great to see another chapter for this story!
And since you're taking suggestions...I ALWAYS love more shadow-tentacle goodness. I'd love to see a hot and heavy scene, even if it turns into fluff at the end. >.> And I hope that a request for some shadow-tentacle + (light) anal play wouldn't be too kinky for this couple. If not, I understand. ^^;;;
And since you're taking suggestions...I ALWAYS love more shadow-tentacle goodness. I'd love to see a hot and heavy scene, even if it turns into fluff at the end. >.> And I hope that a request for some shadow-tentacle + (light) anal play wouldn't be too kinky for this couple. If not, I understand. ^^;;;
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D: Cliffhanger! Noooo!
I'm excited to read what happens next- this story is one of the best on AFF I've ever read. Hell, if this was a book I would buy it- y'know, once I wasn't poor and had the means to get it, haha.
Please update soon! I love this story, it's refreshing and interesting, I love the way you show the Gods. I love this and 'Worthy of Love' they are amazing.
Well, I'm tired of tasting my foot o just going to end with 'I'm waiting eagerly for more of your awesomeness'. ^_^
I'm excited to read what happens next- this story is one of the best on AFF I've ever read. Hell, if this was a book I would buy it- y'know, once I wasn't poor and had the means to get it, haha.
Please update soon! I love this story, it's refreshing and interesting, I love the way you show the Gods. I love this and 'Worthy of Love' they are amazing.
Well, I'm tired of tasting my foot o just going to end with 'I'm waiting eagerly for more of your awesomeness'. ^_^
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
for some reason, i hope this will be different from the other versions where Demeter is still a bitter mother at the end despite her daughter's happiness. I really hope she accepts them! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I like how Zeus is taking baby steps towards becoming a better person. And yet I also love how the other gods are dog-piling on him with the cutting remarks, particularly his own children. Heh.
Ooh, what a cliffhanger. Can't wait to read how the two make their entrance.
Ooh, what a cliffhanger. Can't wait to read how the two make their entrance.
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see demeter's reaction to all of this
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah I'm so glad you updated!! XD I love this story :3 Please update as soon as you can!!! :D