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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok this is actually an amazing version of the myth, pleaaase update!!!
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it, please update soon. its great so far but i really wanna see the part where he kidnaps her ^^
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. Hades is shown in such a nice way to Kora. So much better than the bastard he's shown as in some stories.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it and can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Reveiew Chapters 1-6
I have been reading this story from the start. The small changes you've made, if any, are not really noticeable and like you've said there are many different verisons. I was surprised when it didn't have pershone (know spelling is wrong), but I really like the back story. I think you writing is really great and did a good job of giving us a feeling of Hades' personality and, of course, pershone creations. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh yea, I love the new title.
Looking forward to your next update.
I have been reading this story from the start. The small changes you've made, if any, are not really noticeable and like you've said there are many different verisons. I was surprised when it didn't have pershone (know spelling is wrong), but I really like the back story. I think you writing is really great and did a good job of giving us a feeling of Hades' personality and, of course, pershone creations. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh yea, I love the new title.
Looking forward to your next update.
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really adore stories about Hades and Persephone but this going even beyond that story, I like what you are doing and can't wait for when she gets older. i really love Greccian mythology. I only have one thing to say, in a lot of your stories I noticed you really drag things out, and after a while I lose intrest I hope you don't do that this time, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great job, update soon please
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting so far, I really like the steady pace of the narrative. It's not weighed down by too much introspective description, and the characters are defined very well.
There is one thing in this chapter - Demeter states that even in the cooler months, the earth is simply storing life until spring.
There is no spring, until Demeter is returned to earth.
lasae
There is one thing in this chapter - Demeter states that even in the cooler months, the earth is simply storing life until spring.
There is no spring, until Demeter is returned to earth.
lasae
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I enjoyed it a lot.
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the Greek mythology theme, but your title confuses me. Ater can't modify vita, and if vita is the object it needs to be in the accusative (unless it's in the ablative?). Sorry to be so anal about this, but untranslated Latin haunts me so. If you want it in Greek, by the way, I'm happy to translate. :-)