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Very nice fic. The only thing I would change is your use of the word "kid." It sounds far too informal and doesn't really fit with the rest of the story. It was jarring. If you go back and edit, I'd suggest you replace "kid" with "child." Overall, your writing is very good. I like that you gave a complete backstory for the conception of Kora/Persephone, it gives a nice context to the rest. The descriptions of Persephone and Hades in front of the mirror and of the night-time visits were great.
I look forward to reading more of this story.

Another awesome chapter! You really are a talented writer, and I love the interaction between these two. It will be interesting to see how Demeter handles this!

this is getting so interesting. Will Kora accept? Will Hades make love to her? This is an incredible story. Thanks for sharing it with us! I love the kindness and yet darkness in Hades, it's an excellent combination.

iw as reading this story on ff.net but i decided to come read the naughty version. hohoho. But anyway... i just wanted to say this chapter say 11 instead of 9. you put XI instead of IX....

Yay!! So much smut!! I really like the way you presented this. Once again, i like comparing the different myth interpretations between Capture of the Maiden and this. Honestly, I though the jillion-orgasams was the approach Zuko would use iwth Katara, but Katara was too timid for that. I love the subtle differences in persephone's interpretation that makes her so much more willing to go along with something like that. I love the talent you display, in the different methods of over-protectiveness Hakoda and Demeter displayed. Also, what exactly does 'persephone' mean? ^_^ Awesome update, as always. Thank you!!!

Expertly, EXPERTLY written. That's all I could think while reading this chapter. Your TRULY gifted writer.

The fact that you were able to make this chapter sweet and passionately HOT at the same time is awesome! I really am enjoying this story and can hardly wait for your next update! :)

Lovely chapter. Go, Hades! I was surprised he didn't use his chariot, but it's your story and I'm not gonna bitch about the 'inaccuracies'.

holy moly that was amazing. It was so intense, I could feel Kora's fright at Hades. I loved what Hades did to Ares, serves him right! lol. What will happen next? I am dying to know if Kora will love him or if he will have to take her by force. I think she will eventually come to care for him but not right away as obviously who would be happy by being snatched away from their beloved mother and seeing friend get disintegrated! I honestly don't really remember the myth but I like your story just the way it is, I don't think it has to be exactly like the myth, you are an author so I like that you are putting your own twist to it. Love this story!!!

More!! I love it, please post soon.. I can't wait to see what Hades has in stored for his goddess.. Great JOB :)