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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
VERY WELL DONE!
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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Persephone! You would think Hades would get the message after all she went through to try and get away from him. Very well done, can't wait to see how it progresses from here!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD !!!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOO THE PLOT THICKENS!!!!!!
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovin this story. well written. keep it up. :D
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! And to think that I already liked (more like was attracted to) this myth before you made it more novelized! And I guess it helped that you made Hades sound so handsome! Personally, all I can find for historical depictions of him mostly show him with the beard (your depiction sounds better).
I never really thought about it before, but considering the seeming lack of myths concerning either Hades or Persephone specifically (compared to some other gods), I think that maybe the Greeks just wanted to give Hades a consort like his brothers. But even so, I love the way you made it so that it was more like that Hades and Persephone were (literally) destined to be together! And even though they were destined, I loved how you made it so that Persephone didn't just give in to Hades' desire to keep her in the Underworld. Fighting a little against fate always seems more exciting than just going with it (at least it does in literature). Not to mention that their more physically intimate moments are just pure deliciousness!!! =^_^=
I have a feeling that now that the tour of the Underworld is done that it would be a great time to mention how frantic Demeter would be getting at this moment and about some of the other things that happened to Demeter during her search for Persephone (or Kora). Before I finish this off, I have a question: You mentioned early on that, even though it would take a lot of energy, it is possible for gods and goddesses to die or be killed. Would that apply to possible drowning? Or corrosive liquids (I'm not sure which one could possibly apply)?
I never really thought about it before, but considering the seeming lack of myths concerning either Hades or Persephone specifically (compared to some other gods), I think that maybe the Greeks just wanted to give Hades a consort like his brothers. But even so, I love the way you made it so that it was more like that Hades and Persephone were (literally) destined to be together! And even though they were destined, I loved how you made it so that Persephone didn't just give in to Hades' desire to keep her in the Underworld. Fighting a little against fate always seems more exciting than just going with it (at least it does in literature). Not to mention that their more physically intimate moments are just pure deliciousness!!! =^_^=
I have a feeling that now that the tour of the Underworld is done that it would be a great time to mention how frantic Demeter would be getting at this moment and about some of the other things that happened to Demeter during her search for Persephone (or Kora). Before I finish this off, I have a question: You mentioned early on that, even though it would take a lot of energy, it is possible for gods and goddesses to die or be killed. Would that apply to possible drowning? Or corrosive liquids (I'm not sure which one could possibly apply)?
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good for Persephone! I hope she makes him wait a while! Another wonderful chapter!
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ugh I love how well you compose this story so tastefully. XD
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aidoneus, such a perfect name. Yes, Aidoneus and Persephone sound rather dignified...
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOO the plot thickens!!!! XD can't wait for more