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for Darkness Becomes Her

by Spleef

person mamaT
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter. very inventive of zeus having hermes try and find kora. :D
person Mandy88
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update the story soon. I hope she soon falls in love with Hades :-D.
person Dejsha
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter and I love how you alternate between the different people. Great chapter. Also, your vocabulary is impressive:)
person Vanny
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Standing ovation!!!!!! I really need to say that I find your story totally intriguing, exiting, overwhelming and lovable. It’s not easy to find a story like this; with a touch of authenticity and at the same time realistic behavior and feeling of each character. Because let’s face it, most people like stories that have no depth, and yours definitely has it.
I’m thrilled and happy to have the opportunity of living this story, thank you for that. You are a very talented writer. I love that you have stayed faithful on the Greek mythology legend of this particular story and embellishing it with the original spice that you are using. The character of Hades is my favorite, mostly the way he is.
Definitely …. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! Please up date soon.
person Dejsha
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story; its amazing! I also reviewed on fanfiction as well. Great work and please update! Dejsha
person xox_girl
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOO AMAZING
UPDATE SOON
im dying to see what happens!
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn... Growing pains... hopefully she'll remember she has female friends down here too... and Hades will realize that his magic stick does not solve all problems in the Dis
person mamaT
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well done regarding her having her period. :D
person ally
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nooooo
shes pushing him away :(
she should just eat the damn fruit >:(

ARGH
when will she come to love him?
person Ann10550
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....poor Hades....but then again she is on her period with no chocolate...or any other kinda comfort food.... Serves him right

Just don't make Persephone too mad at him for long.