rate_review Reviews

Your story is so well written and so entertaining. Thankyou so much for continuing to write ;)

I love this story, reading it has gotten me interesting in Mythology again lol. Please keep the story going as long as you can, it would be great to read it to the finish!

I absolutely adore this story. It's so well written, the plot is soaring and detailed, and the characters are so interesting. I really enjoyed this story, I read it all in one night! :) Especially, because I had yet to run across a myth story before this, and its of Greek Gods and Godesses, a subject I find fascinating. The myths themselves are great, intriguing stories, but I love when stories are made around those myths, it really brings the old tales to life. Also, I hope Hekate comes into play again soon, I LOVE her character, she's playful and sarcastic but a bit more adult than Persephone (and she's personally one of my favorite gods). Its funny because of all the Gods, I always found Hades the most alluring and interesting, and of all the Godesses, I always found Persephone the most enchanting and easy to identify with. Next to the story of Eros and Psyche, their story is my absolute favorite.
Thank you for the enjoyable read, and I can't wait for the next chapter (and possibly more smut? XD)

The short, less H+P chapter didn't bother me - the other inhabitants of Dis are pretty interesting by themselves :)

I like how you described Hypnos' voice as velvty. I can't imagine a better description of the act of sleep itself. Write more soon.

I liked 24 to be honest xD I loved how Zeus was able to avoid telling Demeter where Persephonie was by telling the truth... without some very critical details xD The thing with Charon was cool too, its nice to know he can sneak off and do what he wants when he feels like it. I always thought he was a mortal who rowed the ferry, yet you say hes a god...? I'm not saying you're wrong, I'm curious as to where you got your information xD;; I especially want to know because we had somewhat of a debate about how Charon got his job in my Latin class yesterday. We all thought he was a human, not a god. But I digress.

As for 25, Hypnos is an interesting character :3 I shall await for further interactions with him and watch with interest. He seems slippery, but slippery isn't always a bad thing. I also can't wait to see what twist you pull when it comes to Persephone actually eating the seeds *nod* keep up the good work!

Great job on another fascinating chapter. I like how you show Persephone growing up in her thinking, moving beyond her basic resentment of Demeter to have more sympathy for her mother's perspective. Interesting discussion about sleep and dreams.

Given the way she feels she was repressed by her mother, sold out by her father, and held captive by Hades, I feel bad that accepting Hades as her husband would mean "giving in" to her captor. Hopefully, he will make a real concession to her to put them on more equal footing? (more than just X pomegranate seeds = X months in the underworld?)

This is a great chapter; interesting about sleep and dreams. I hope you update and thanks for updating on my birthday! x

I'm so excited for the future chapters! I'd love to see how Iasion's storyline works out, and what's going on with Charon? Juicy=) And of course, it's sweet how Hades yearns for Persephone.

Thanks for the new chapter! I eagerly await every new one.

More Hades & Persephone, please . . . I can't wait to see how she comes to terms with her maturing body (and growing hunger), and how she comes to accept him as her husband.

Great work!