rate_review Reviews

Happy New Year! I'm so happy to see a new chapter, especially with such a tasty lemon. The invisible lover is a nice twist. I am also really enjoying how you are developing the landscape of the underworld. It sounds beautiful and magical.

I love seeing Hades & Persephone getting closer and closer. I am intrigued by your mention of your next story arc, but I'll keep my fingers crossed that we don't lose the interactions between H & P, especially when they're so close to consummating their relationship.

Thanks for another fascinating, well-written chapter.

that was sooo good
ughh seph needs to hurry it upp
keep it up!

This is fantastic and very detailed; I like how Hades is invisebel

lovely filler chapter. can't wait to find out what's next in the arc. :D

I enjoy each new chapter and eagerly await the new ones. I'm looking forward to discovering what hell Demeter tries to unleash when she realizes where her daughter is as well as what she'll do when she finds out that Persephone actually loves being there even though she wants to go back to the surface. Somehow I don't think Demeter will care that Persephone wants to share her time between her mother and her husband. I think Demeter will demand that Persephone return to the surface and forget about Hades.

Wootness! Yay for the update!:D

Now that her time on the rag is over, I hope we get another lemon soon :)

I like the story a lot and check regularly for updates, please keep up the good work!

I was taught to always leave constructive feedback when reviewing so here goes:

I love the rich supporting characters, especially the gods under Hades. Everyone you introduce in the story seems to have depth enough to be interesting.

There are a lot of modern phrases and dialog mixed in. A young woman of the time period wouldn't refer to someone as an "asshole" as one example. There are plenty of words to describe what she might think of them or even insults of the time. "As if" I don't believe was a common phrase either. Modern bits popping up are a bit distracting.

The story conflict is waning lately. We know her reasons and we know his reasons. While we know she is softening to him, they don't seem to be doing much. With the romantic characters just coasting right now it's slow. I'm hoping perhaps they do some bonding with collusion.

The setting is amazing, btw. Hades' realm is strange and beautifully described. Please update soon! =)

Re: chapter XXV

What an excellent chapter! It is very well written, and advances the story very nicely. The character development is quite well done. I love reading the interactions between this very appealing couple.

Now that her time-of-the-month is over, maybe another lemon? :D

Great job!

I love this chapter, maybe we are getting somewhere with her falling in love with Hades! I hope you update again soon!