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lovely chapter and the meeting between kora and her father. well done. :D

I absolutely LOVE this novel-in-progress. I read all of the chapters in one go and now I think I need a nap. I love how you use your knowledge of well-known myths along with some of the more obscure ones to write such a creative and dare I say, steamy, romance between Persephone and Aidoneus. I definitely can't wait for the next installment. The only piece of constructive criticism I can offer is that there are some very minor grammatical errors and sometimes spelling errors. The spelling errors are usually typing mistakes like typing "ad" instead of "as," which I'm sure is a very common mistake for any of us. Other than that I see nothing wrong with this AWESOME story and I say on with the show!

I'm really curious to see where this story is going! I'm interested to see how all the story lines will tie in, but I'm sure you'll do a fabulous job. I love Persephone's stubbornness, I mean sure Hades is a good man for her, but I love how she refuses to give in because it gives her depth that she doesn't usually have in the myths. Yay for this story:)

This is such a great story! I can't wait until you update and finish it!

I've been enthralled since the first sentences! The Hades/Persephone story has always been one of my favorites. Just like Psyche and Eros. ^_^

So sweet! And Hades is such a gentleman! Ooooh I SO can't wait to see how you write out the conclusions for this! :D

I want to say that I love your story so much, I can hardly wait every time a new chapter appears; I even check every day. ƒº I¡¦m really amazed and in oath of your outstanding talent. The way you are involving the characters with actual and truthful research on Hellenic myths with a touch of humanness and sensuality is incredibly well handled.
I have come to learn many things with your story but mostly I always end up with a smile. ļ Thank you for that.
Never stop writing all that you desire through your life; ¡¥cause you are a GREAT WRITER with a REMARKABLE talent.
I wish the Best to you and keep on with the story, it¡¦s beautiful.
Bye.

Great chapter, but will she eat something already! lol

lovely chapter!!!! so well-written :D

Good chapter -- I like the interaction between Zeus and Hades. The way you use what we know from mythology to illuminate the character of Zeus is particularly well done. I also liked Hades' subtle humor.

It still doesn't seem like Persephone is softening her stance very much. What will it take for her to eat the pomegranate seeds . . . ?

I have read your story thus far and I think that this has been the best chapter yet.
Your writing is compelling and I appreciate your unique use of time, characters and classical mythology.
I think that you should focus a little more on details that you may consider unimportant, they will make the world you are describing more realistic. Also, your grammar is very good, but there are a few places that could use some revising.
I've loved this work so far and I am excited to read the rest. You have a gift for writing.
Best of luck!

-Beck

u are so awesome! keep writing! i have been waiting for a story like since FOREVER!