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for Darkness Becomes Her

by Spleef

person mamat
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter. :D
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They are SOOOO adorable together. Hades is so enamored with her that it is just so cute to watch him try to please her while still trying to get his way. They are absolutely perfect together. Despite the fact that this chapter was kind of just a filler, I absolutely loved it! Thank you for the update. I really can't wait to read more.
person Shani
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh the naughtiness! You had a few grammatical errors (like "a" instead of "an" before a vowel), but overall I liked it very much! It's interesting that Hades set up a deadline for informing Demeter, but I have a feeling a lot of drama will go down before Demeter finds out. I cannot wait:)
person circe266
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, a chapter filled with wonderful, smutty goodness. Favorite images: Hades on his knees, begging for a chance at her love; Persephone completely enveloped in his fondling shadows.

I love these lemony interludes as much as the plot-advancing chapters. Keep up the good work! ;-D
person Daphne
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am a avid reader of your stories having come across them at fanfiction.net, and this is another amazing story in the making! I am a massive fan on greek mythology (going to the extent of planning to study it in university!) and so please to see that you try to stay true to the myths by doing extensive research on them. Love how you mentioned Apollo's failed attempts to woo my namesake Daphne the nymph :)
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I really enjoyed seeing Hades helpless against Persephone's tantrum. A confused lord of the dead is actually kind of adorable. Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what Hekate's next move will be.
person circe266
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aargh! You've got me bouncing between wanting them to get together (when I read their sweet & sexy interactions), and being indignant on Persephone's behalf (due to his uncompromising, insensitive behavior). I look forward to seeing how you resolve this dynamic.

I enjoyed this chapter's female solidarity. I love how you have written Hekate's character.

Thank you for another lovely chapter.
person mamaT
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovely to see kora start standing up for herself. :D
person Amanda88
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon, this is such a great story!
person circe266
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had been wondering when Persephone would meet up with her father, so I enjoyed their sweet reunion. It seems that their conversation and her memory of trying on her mother's clothes seem to be a sort of closure on her childhood. Is she finally ready to accept Hades' love and be his wife?