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I really  like  your story  

I have a link directly to your story and I was so worried that aff.net had messed up your story! I was so very relieved to see that you had taken it down and was excited to see that you've gotten such a fabulous story to a publisher! I cannot wait to purchase it: thank you for putting such a wonderful story online in the first place.

Damn,I had been eyeing this story for a while but have never got round to reading it- oh well. Sorry to hear about the plagarism and good luck with the publication.

Zomg what happened to the other chapters because I know that there are like 57 chapters and not just one what the f*** happened to them all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
With confusion,
Rose Carter

Oh oopps sorry didn't read the top just imdietly ( hope fully you can decifur my spelling ) started looking for favorite chapters *sigh* I should have saved it when I had the chance
: ( well I guss I just have to wait till it's a book to see it again
Love,
Rose Carter

Hey have you ever considered writhing a Phantom of the Opera fic because the way you wright a Hades and Persephone story you coulg wright one hell of a story about Erik and Christne!!!!!!! Or perhaps if your more of a movie through the ages Roul and Christne story and if you have no idea what the he'll I'm talking about jus forget very yore I just said!!!!
Love,
Rose Carter

really enjoyed the story overall. and the epilogue was perfect. :D

Congratulations on completing another wonderful story, and good luck in your goal of having it published. I sincerely believe it would make a great novel. I can't wait to see what you work on next. I love how the epilogue shows a short stint through time, and I especially like Persephone's trip to the fates. I actually thought she would do that earlier in the story, so it was a pleasant surprise to see it at the end. Even though she had already come to terms with her marriage to Hades, I feel like her questioning the Fates was a kind of final acceptance of it all. All in all, I love the entire story and I hope to see it in stores some day. :D

By the way, Seeds of Destiny would definitely be my choice. :)

woah.

What a lovely wedding, and very yummy wedding night! The wonderful way you wrote their love scene was everything I was hoping for, particularly Persephone's confident control and Hades' helpless pleasure. I like how their roles in this scene, as well as his mock brutish carrying her from his chariot, brings them full circle to the beginnings of their relationship, while reflecting their character development. Nicely done!

As you wrap the story up, I am wondering: will Demeter meet and fall in love again with the reincarnated Iason? I hope so, though I guess it will be a couple of decades before he is 'of age' again. And will Ares ever get his manhood back? Not that I think should, but it seems like a loose thread that would be good to tie up.

I am so going to miss this story when it's over!