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for The Slave Factory

by linnamedeiros

person Silentia
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really like the beginning, even though it is somewhat short );
now i´m curious to see where you go from there so i´m really looking forward to the next part.
sorry this review sucks but i´m crap at writing and additionally, english is not my native language so that makes it double the harder...
BABA
Silentia