schedule
May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting start.I wonder about the comment on the green eyes...is it a bad sign or sth ? Onto chpater 2 !!
schedule
May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Orrick seems to be a rather "nice" master towards his slaves;What we've seen so far about the rules of the house seem to be eady to follow.I'm waiting for more !
schedule
May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Emjoying it so far. look forward to more chapters xx
schedule
May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please continue posting. Your first three chapters were riveting. I want to know more!
schedule
May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so far it sounds like it's going to be a very interesting story. it is also pretty well written, though i did catch some spelling errors...but you already said that you don't normally re-read before you post, so that is fine! Overall I think it is going to be a good story!
Cloudyseph
Cloudyseph
schedule
May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story sounds very interesting. I hope you will keep updating it.