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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im really enjoying this story. Cant wait for more chapters xx
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far I really like it. I find the tiger intriguing. I hope your blockage on chapter eleven resolve itself.
(oh! and I hope Zero is alright!)
Bye
M
(oh! and I hope Zero is alright!)
Bye
M
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the quick update. Please don't worry about typos too much. I only pointed them out to help you save time. I'd definitely prefer that you post the stories quickly, instead of checking for perfection, to keep the momentum the going - because I'm definitely curious about how Zero is going to make an impact here! :-) Orrick is interesting; he has seemed kind so far, but he's still a Master - to sell his favorite instead of freeing her, even after she has served him well, seems brutal. Interested to see how he will develop.
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice plot
I am looking forward to more of you story
I am looking forward to more of you story
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, but isn't the thing with Zero and why he's nicknamed that taken straight from 'Holes'?
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how things turn out!
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work xx
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good work! I'm glad that I found this story!!!
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still very interesting. Somehow, short chapters really work for this story. And while the name Zero is the same in both, your Zero is much quieter.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing start! Thanks for sharing your story.
Some typos? "You might [not] see them, but believe me, they are there. When [you] have reached a certain point,"
Some typos? "You might [not] see them, but believe me, they are there. When [you] have reached a certain point,"