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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:D i really really am curious about what type of creature Zero's familiar is! how will it represant his character/self etc since i'm assuming that the form the familiar takes isn't just coincidence xD
::offers up heapfuls of banana walnut muffins::
::offers up heapfuls of banana walnut muffins::
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_______________________________________O ................................................ ................................... i'll assume evadne went to get his familiar or something like that .... cause there is no way zero is dieing now of all times :C but this is one serious cliffy but i will assume all will be well. yes it will. uh huh. it stories things should end well.... update soon :D i find this very interesting, even when you leave us hanging from a clif edge.
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Cliff hanger! Two chapters in a row! It's horrible. I'm dying here. I have to know what happens next. Any chance I can bribe you with fudge? It's tasty. Or cookies. Muffins? Baked goods of any kind? >.< Please post more soon. *theatrical*
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, the tension, the tension. I really like this story :3
A little something I've picked up on. Sometimes you write stuff like this. "...her nose gently nudging the side of Zero’s face. Zero’s face was pale..." It becomes a little repetitive. Maybe you can rephrase it.
Other than that, I really like this story :3 Now, not only am I curious about his health, but this talk about familiars xD Me wanna know more!
A side note. I just can’t keep this to myself. My two “key-words” are “stuffier Indian-head”. Like ??? That just… ain’t right.
A little something I've picked up on. Sometimes you write stuff like this. "...her nose gently nudging the side of Zero’s face. Zero’s face was pale..." It becomes a little repetitive. Maybe you can rephrase it.
Other than that, I really like this story :3 Now, not only am I curious about his health, but this talk about familiars xD Me wanna know more!
A side note. I just can’t keep this to myself. My two “key-words” are “stuffier Indian-head”. Like ??? That just… ain’t right.
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Keep up the good work. And can you please make your chapters a little bit longer
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how fast you update, am really enjoying this story and i cant wait to see how zero and orrick get closer. roll on more chapters. xxxx
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... sort of short but still interesting. I'm not sure if it was on purpose.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More?
I think this story is very interesting so far. I started reading when you posted the first chapter. I hesitated in reviewing until now only because it seems like I keep getting called away from the computer. >.<
I hope to see more tomorrow. ^.^
My favorite character is Evadne. Sorry if this seems really random. It's nearly 1:30 am. I'm very tired.
Alright.
I'll review again later.
And hopefully read more soon.
I think this story is very interesting so far. I started reading when you posted the first chapter. I hesitated in reviewing until now only because it seems like I keep getting called away from the computer. >.<
I hope to see more tomorrow. ^.^
My favorite character is Evadne. Sorry if this seems really random. It's nearly 1:30 am. I'm very tired.
Alright.
I'll review again later.
And hopefully read more soon.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*_* i am so excited with where this is headed :D and i absolutely ADORE evadne xD that tiger knows whats what ::snickers:: can't wait to see what happens to amora and hopefully zero is saved! since i assumed that he got stabbed, but we're not sure...
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and want to know more :3