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had to find this again! Glad you're still alive!

My computer fragged and I had to re find everything all over again (my ds lite was my back up for files and that got fragged too x.x) FIGURES

Still a good story though I just hope to keep up with your updates at a normal basis >_<

Glad to see you back! Thanks for the update.

Wow I really like this story!!!! And the familars!!! What power exept from healing do they have??? Well I really want to see some smutt soon!!!! I hope you will give us a new chappie soon!!!! See you!!!!!

Hello,

emmm ... Actually, I normally don't read fics that are not finished or has at least 15-20 chapters! cause I hate waiting for next chapter! but I was watching and seeing that you are updating every day, tempted me to read this fic! and I'm glad that I did so! :)

I love master and slave fics! I have a thingy for them! :P and yours is very interesting! ;)

But there are two things that keep flashing in my mind! Orrick (did I write it right?) wasn't interested in zero! how come he chose him to be his pet??? I mean nothing especial happened to trigger his affection!!! O.o

and Zero as well seemed pretty upset the first time Orrick kissed him?! what happened, what maked him to want to be with Orrick??? It was a little bit sudden! especially for some one that didn't have any experience and was a virgin! I think you have to put some thing more for the two of them to get interested in each other! especially from zero! :3

I am also very interested about Zero's past! Aren't you going to reveal anything about him?! and are we going to see more magic in this fic?! ^_^

Uh-Ouh, seems like things will look a bit dark for Zero up ahead

*whips out a plate of homemade Banana Walnut Muffins*

Please keep writing. I am sooo enjoying your story.

Here, have another Banana Walnut Muffin.

Laugh. A lemur?! Never saw that one coming. And the name, Vassar. I like the way he thinks, it's sad, but I like it. You know, in my languge, vassar means sharpening :3

So.. this story has a really good context... and plot to it.. although it is really rushed and leaves much to be desired in the explainations department.

I also think the whole sex thing should not have happened yet...

but it is a good plot and I will continue to read this.. the only thing I can suggest would be to try making the chapters longer, but focus on the one idea still .

Banana Walnut Muffins, eh? I'll have to get someone else to bake them. I'm allergic to walnuts. Well, not that severely. I can touch them and stuff. But it means I can't eat any of the muffins. *sadness* Oh well. If I make some I get to enjoy more of the story, right? ^.^
I thought that the exhaling the poison thing was very interesting, I have to say.
And, I wondered... What color are Evadne's eyes? Green?
Alright.
Hope to see more soon.
*off to bake you some banana walnut muffins*

Laugh. You know, every time I log in on AFF I find myself thinking "Maybe there is an update!" Lol. xD I like this story a lot already, so I can't wait to see how it will be with more details and whatnots. But yeah, finish it first x3 He he :3

Now I have to go and walk my sister's dog. Not fair, not fair...