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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is totally hot! You have to write more. Robin is sexy and dominating and Lelani is tough in her own right. I like that she doesn't want to be with him and he is keeping her because he likes her. It's perfect. I think he should join her in the shower even though he wasn't invited, that would be hilarious! Love this story!!
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
Very original, and witty.
And pretty sexy too.
Please update!
Very original, and witty.
And pretty sexy too.
Please update!
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG you HAVE to write more!!! You can't just leave it here!!! It's so good!!!
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a story like this or thought I'd be into one ike this but I REALLY like it. The characters are so interesting and believable.Its been a long time since I've read a story with such good characters.
I really hope you;ll continue cause I cant wait for more!
I really hope you;ll continue cause I cant wait for more!
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay you continued it!!!! Please keep it going! It is VERY good so far!!! I LOVE your characters, and there playful banter!! It's great! Looking forward to your next update XD
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As long as the spelling and grammar is readable I'll give it a chance. I like the banter between them and I was wondering about the police finding them because of the destruction that was cause. Thanks for the read.
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! glad you're continuing!
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update, sounds really interesting
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice Update.
I hope for more.
I hope for more.
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This did get interesting, would like more please! Update soon