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chap 7.

well this was one mega whirlwind.

firstly... i never expected scott to blow up that badly... had he like freaking lost his mind...
but then later. that all was explained...
but we were mostly seeing things through scott's eyes... so we dont know how much damien was fucked up... till he wouldnt wake up anymore....

ok next chap.

chap 8.
aaaaaaaawww yay 8D

things are back to their fluffeh and puddle of goo state...
and im sniffling, but that's coz of the flu. dont go getting the wrong idea :P

chap 9.

Dae-lee's momma is one cool momma~!

and honestly, i think that humping around so early in the morning is what's got dae's fever up again.
honestly... boys and their rocks...

but yay! scott's gonna have to make the make it or break it decision! coz momma definitely wont be letting him of the hook~

chap 10.

wow maaan... dae's mama is soo uber cool.... such a cool mum!
I dunno pesterme. but somehow, the parents in your stories are just so cool.. it's either their parents are dead, or their parents are fucked-uped assholes (but dont matter coz the fucked up cases arn't with their kids), or their parents just rock socks...

whooots~~~ now. imma get some sleep and try to snooze this damn flu away.

chao~ =D

I love love love where this story is going. It's paced perfectly and has a lot of twist that leave me at the edge of my seat. I think I'm falling in love with Dr. Lieberman. Oh and I so want to hug James. I'm glad you wrote a scene in his POV. He's such a cool character I'm glad he's not overlooked. Thank you. I can't wait for the next part.

Oh, by the way, since you have a LiveJournal account, why don't you post this story at some communities there as well. I'll PM you through LJ and give you links. My username is clover71.

Awwww, poor James. I knew James was in love w/Damien, but hearing it from his pov was so sad. Unrequited love really sucks.

I think James and Damien were pretty brave to face Gregg. Not Scott; he could take Gregg down with just a look! hahah

Hopefully Gregg will let things go; I'd hate to see Scott get in trouble for elbowing him.

I also felt bad for Dr. Liebermann; what a horrible thing to have happened to him when he was so young. Can you imagine fearing for your life every time you saw a car? So sad.

Great LONG chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!! Hopefully I'll be able to read it before everyone else! lol

chap 1.

somehow. this school setting is reminding me of 'broken wings' XD
but then, it's something from you pesterme2
such an odd feeling, yet interesting, knowing you are the same person who is writing aurora's consort.

so far so good. thou, this Damien character is one very very horny teenager XD with all the sexual 'favors' he's doing, i worry he'd get raped on day...
*shudders* bad thoughts bad thought... ah well~

next chapter!

OMG....exciting. I still love your story. THank you, thank you thank you! Loads of hugs for you and some more muse so that you'll be nice and inspired!

T ^ T Awwww, I think I feel more and more sorry for James every time we get into his head...poor guy. Hopefully all the shit with Gregg is over and done with now...but I won't hold my breath, lol.
Can't wait to read more~

BUt this isnt new.....sob