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chap play with fire and you might get burned...

again. I'm reminded of "Broken Wings". (you've got to have read it to understand why thou)

but. heh.... hehehehehehehe~ oh boy oh boy =D are they screwed or what?!
that's what you get, when you try to outwit a grandmother - generations older than you are.
I learned never to underestimate my elders. they have wisdom and see things beyond the normal eye.
but ah well... i guess the fun was, fun, while it lasted.

now... BUSTED!!!

chap 23.

i so knew granny would have them strung back on her thread of beads again.

but what the heck was that about "diving for oysters" ? XDD
I understand 'hiding the sausage' but... 'diving for oysters'???

but yeah. whoa... quite the whirlwind yeah this chapter... hot mama indeed~

and that JOCK had better learn to reign in his anger and strength! >(
let's just hope scott doesnt get angry at dae too often now. it could become dangerous.

chap 24.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh... kissing infront of the parents eh. so bold so bold. soooooo, *grins* =D

but.... WHOOOOOOOOOOTS!!! after the whole court fiasco. its back to school!!!
going back to school has never been more exciting ~!!!

chap 20.


I so can't fully understand a guy with two girls.
I can understand two guys with a girl.
Or three guys together is toootally hot too. (you should read "Broken Wings" by Katica Locke 8D )

and I wonder how this whole 'screw granny!!!' plan's gonna work out.
I'm half afraid granny will suddenly have a heart attack or soemthing and die in the middle of it all.
that would soooo suck ass...

*throws confetti* Hurray! Damien's finally ready to try to take back his art & his life...w/the help of one smexy Adonis ofc! ^_^

Poor James though, his life just seems to get suckier & suckier as we go along.

I can't wait for the next chappy so keep up the good work! Oh, and give your editor/proofreader a big huggles from me. The quality of your work reflects their's and you're smart cookie to accept the help & I'm sure constructive criticizim.

chap 15.

OUH HOLY SHIT! if granny is smart enough to do all that... and figure things out that far...

THERE is no way in HELL those two are gonna be able to hide their secret from her...

BUSTED!!!

chap 16.

Okay so..... there were photo's... D=
I hate those things!!!

You know 'gravitation' ? I read once a fanfic, of a scene, when the older lover... SAW THOSE PHOTOS!!! (of his younger lover's rape scene)... It was... D= OOOH NOOOOOOO!!!

I hope Dae burns all that information. and the photo's... it'd definitely eat at Scott to see such things...

But phew. thank god their both well enough to push such thoughts aside and have mind-blowing smex. XD

chap 17.

you stick humor into the oddest places! XD
what Granny-Spies-a-Lot, and her sidekick Mary the Mercenary XD

and then......... and then......

OH NO!!!! this is rather a-typical in a certain genre of shoujo manga.
the prince of the story is fixed up with an arranged matchmaking session!!!
what girl is this granny wants to introduce to scott??? jean grey???? XDDDDD

*sighs* and here I was, hoping granny had figured them out.... ah well...

chap 18.


OH YAY! Liberty CAUGHT THEM SMOKING!

I think she can keep the secret... can she? WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAAH!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!

Next chap!

chap 19.


Granny and Mary..... O_O whoa.
this has gotta be the... uhm... first, female x female thing I've read. and
Granny and MAry?! that's like... like... very old x rather old ... that's like... i don't know...

It's like thinking about your grandparents having sex... it's hard to... er... think such things....
*FROWNS* eeeeeeeeeeeeeerrr.... I can't even get a mental image going... yeah... my mind is not able to produce such imagination.
I think it's a self-protecting mechanism , yknow, to protect myself from being BLINDED or smthing...

yeaaaaaaaahh..... o_O"""

somehow. the shock of THAT. overwhelms the shock of "GRANNY KNOWS!" ...

yeaaah......... O_O

you just never cease to amaze me....