rate_review Reviews

Pester! Loved this chapter. It was QUITE good. Can't really say much more because you already know how I feel. Glad that Scott's not QUITE as snowed by Grape Ape as we originally thought.

chap 31.

J-James... JAMES!? Why'd you... but... yeah... but well, at least, it wasn't... rape... but...........
Wow Daemien must feel like shit now. What with James confessing and all... but........... *sighs*

hur... so what now... and to think I'm catching up with your updates...
and to think things are in the same sad note as AC.... GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!
it's angst fest!!!!

chap 32...

holey moley cow and donkey! I've caught up....... *sighs*

James takes center stage!!! *cheeers* the crowd goes wild!!!! *cheers*
thou... this lime light James is getting ain't all that great. his shit is being dug up and rubbed back in his face.
not nice at all... man... if James makes it out of all this alive. I'd have to say he's got one damn strong will man.

his best friend doesnt return his feelings. he ends up playing match maker for his love and famous jock of the school.
he ends up making a deal with the devil. gets caught by the one he loves with said devil.
he keeps talking about how dae's eyes light up and smile when dae sees scott. what about you james,,, it's gonna be hard for you to smile honestly now with all this shit going on, and with scott hanging of dae like a shadow.
who's gonna notice that your eyes don't shine anymore?
*hugs James* waaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! my dear club president!!! whops, wrong james. *cough*

anyway............... anyway..............

there's still so many problems to solve.

the gregg problem
that steven.
dae's future, art, blah.
James.....

this.... story... has much more chapter to go~

And I get to wait for each one of them.......... (is that a good thing or bad thing, i can't decide... XD )

okay! yay! I shall pester you for an update as your name suggests!!!

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ok. *huffs* im tired.

GOOD NIGHT! SEE YA NEXT CHAP!!!

- nekoii

ps:
*pester* UPDATE OKAY? -puppy eyes- *pester*

chap 30.

its hard to type in the dark. but... gah. i must type out review.........

okay... okay...

HOT DATE INDEED! i wonder what happened to that article of underwear, and that, butt plug...
what a waste of good material. well. now... scott can buy dae new ones~
heheeee~

and then.... STEVEN. needs a boyfriend. one that is single, gay, and available.

chap 27.

losing 2 pounds in a week is okay whaaaat... 2 pounds is like 3 kilograms.
once, when sick, i lost 3 kilograms (nearly 7 pounds) in less than a week! *shrugs shrugs*

but if dae is ALREADY underweight, and loosing more... then... DANGERZONE!!!
s punch alone from gregg would break his bones, what with no flesh protecting it.

and.... what ELSE is dae hiding from scott?
doesn't scott know everything? he even knows that rape part. thou. dae wasn't the one who told him.
now even the gregg thing is out in the open...
so...

what else?

something that even WE the reader, doesnt know?

O_O

chap 28.

I was just thinking... if i ever had to sit on a psychiatrist appointment. I'd just stare at the nutcase and try to figure out how their brain is working...
just knowing that they'd probably cracked their brains over studying for 30 over years would be enough to know that they'd gone through a hell of a trauma. XD

sooooooooooooooo.. this new lil twink. Steven... I have a feeeeeeeeeeeeeliiinnngggg this little twinkle toes........ is not gonna be loved very much....

chap 29.

spanking isn't really a punishment. when the sub's really into it. and it's not painful enough~
dae should get 18 x 2. with a paddle XD

but yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... seveeee boy is up to noo goood... i wonder i wonder about him....

and then james... just what horse is this huh. i bet he's of to meet someone he doesnt want to meet again...

chap 25.

back to schooooooooooooool~~~ and jaaaaaaaaaaaames. just whaat are you up toooo? who's that... "jock" ? eeeeh~~~~
and what's up with Ryaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan~~~

and its so troublesome to type when you're lying in bed........

chap 26.

rut rut. alot of rutting. then sleep.

talks to mum n dad.

then rut again. before going to eat.

Whaaat a life~ *phew*
Anyway, from what I know, a 'bottom' can still be fine and walk about no matter how many times his ass got pounded into.
What's more important is what position he was in. Like say, if he had to go cowboy the whole way. His leg's would give way before his ass falls off....

Whaaat am i talking about.?

sleep. i need sleep. gah.

chap 21.

I HONESTLY think that them two going at it like rabid bunnies in heat, will get themselves caught one fine day.
Maybe it's coz I'm just too used to having people just barge into my room...
Maybe it's different with Scott. Nobody would come up to his room for no good reason...

BUT STILL! the RISK! XD